my second try at Jerry's septcouplet. Hope it's okay this time Jer!;-)
as the infusion of indelible ink imprints your dna in me I shiver in anticipation of becoming you as mine is already infused you describe it divine
glistening glow celestial flow
how to relate the ecstasy growing inside like fire igniting senses with indescribable energy evolving into exhilerating euphoria for eternity
intrepid trips in new starships
we are the prototype for united couples in the new universe and will serve in unknown galaxies bringing to fruition ways under Creators plans to all who will populate new planets
galactic saints no more restraints
some already in evidence by many of the celestial audience that have waited for eons to emerge into the now of all time without past or future but always in the present
perfected how of always now
we are joined in such a way that no one ever dreamed of and as we become each other while remaining ourselves we create a new vocabulary to describe our feelings~
to new nations gift creations
we are told it will be soon we delight in the news elated to know we will have new words to compose our poetry we can't imagine feeling more excited than we do now
soar together muses weather
with this new knowledge as we celebrate our uniqueness with glorious glee feeling most sublime and happy we are now ready to assume our roles in new realms
Have to admire this wonderful attempt - nay! - SUCCESS at writing to form, Eileen. And the subject matter is fascinating. Have never been into sci-fi much... but this kind of Clark Kent and Lois Lane stuff is highly appealing! Very well done, thank you. LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2006
Love the romance, description and use of form. Great write.
After I read this beautiful piece, I checked to see what the Master, Jerry said. I'm glad it meets with his approval. I admire you for trying and succeeding at this. Your words are magnificant.
we are the prototype for united couples
in the new universe
and will serve in unknown galaxies
bringing to fruition ways
under Creators plans
to all who will populate new planets
Sounds marvelous, Tiger Lily. Are you Peter's new partner on his epic Sojourn to Mars??!!
The content of the poem is awesome alone Eileen, notwithstanding the attention to the format !
You would appear to have mastered this septcouplet form in your own inimitable style !
Love that mystical pic !
Peter
I am honored and impressed, Eileen, that you and Kara saw fit to tackle the seprcouplet, and see, it wasn'tt as difficult as first imagined. It'll grow on you, maybe. Thank you for giving me the upfront kudos.
Goodness gracious, these is absolutely breathtaking in meaning and inspiration! You shine in this one, absolutely yes. Thank you--BRAVA! (And I'm glad I could provide a bit of inspiration...LOVE the photo.)
You mastered the septcouplet, brilliantly, Eileen. It is not as easy as it looks, though I found the free verse portion to allow a lot of flexibility. Beautiful poem I am sure Jerry will be delighted.
Take care,
Sherry
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in the new universe
and will serve in unknown galaxies
bringing to fruition ways
under Creators plans
to all who will populate new planets
Sounds marvelous, Tiger Lily. Are you Peter's new partner on his epic Sojourn to Mars??!!
You would appear to have mastered this septcouplet form in your own inimitable style !
Love that mystical pic !
Peter
Love your readings on William DeVault's program!!
Well done!!
Love Tinka
WOW, what a wonderful septcouplet, very well done! You have done a bang up job here! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Goodness gracious, these is absolutely breathtaking in meaning and inspiration! You shine in this one, absolutely yes. Thank you--BRAVA! (And I'm glad I could provide a bit of inspiration...LOVE the photo.)
(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla.
Carmen :-)
Take care,
Sherry