Jerry Boltons style-septcouplet seven six line stanza's each followed by a couplet of four syllable words that rhyme entire poem lower case...any topic -----------------------------------------
the magical luminosity of the morning aroused a desire in me I got out of bed quickly threw a robe on went out on my balcony
a scene divine and it was mine
there was a glorious peach glow with an apricot glaze the bright colored sky cast everything in happy hues a few streaks of white cloud were fast dispersing
sky colored maze sun looked ablaze
effervescent thoughts danced in my mind of the passionate kind the dream I had in the night was being enacted before me I was embraced by the light
all seems surreal elusive feel
in plain sight all the beauty of ressurection in the sunrise taking place before my eyes I experience a divine moment am I really outside or am I still dreaming
suns transition morphed position
my answer comes I hear birds twittering I feel strange, full of wonder with mixed emotions I give thanks I feel like dancing and chanting my dream is alive and well
how to relate all that is fate
the beauty in a moment can change an entire life yet often we keep our eyes averted seeking material things or trying to catch the ephemeral when all around us is true wonder
do not disguise things in your eyes
I close my eyes in hopes to find the words to properly describe such an awesome event nothing new under the sun that's what is said yet what I saw was never seen before
You've done a wonderful job with this form! I really liked this passage: "the beauty in a moment
can change an entire life
yet often we keep our eyes averted
seeking material things
or trying to catch the ephemeral
when all around us is true wonder"
Well, neologize is definitely a new word under the sun for me... and now I've used it twice - here and on Peter's page today, too! :)) Of all creation, I think the stunning colours in dawn and dusk are perhaps the most awe-inspiring... and how is it that we feel such a sense of privilege to witness them sometimes that we DO indeed believe that such a show has been laid on just for us??! Just goes to show that each sky, each day is as different as each of us... and as special. TY and bless you, Kate xx
Great job, Eileen! I am really liking this format because the six-line freestyle verses allow for the writer to tell a complete story and the rhyming lines make for a nice segue from one verse into the next, a lot like chapters in a book. Beautiful words and picture!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
That you did.
This is beautiful and the picture is perfect.
This is so delightful. Your experience seems like a prayer. Wish I could enjoy the mornings. Guess I'll just have to stick with sunsets :>) Beautiful, Eileen.
Dreams and dreaming are to the fore today in the Den, and this is a dream of Intelligent Design, that pours from your page in captivating septcouplet form !
You rock Eileen !
Love the dreamy pic !
Peter
the beauty in a moment
can change an entire life
yet often we keep our eyes averted
seeking material things
or trying to catch the ephemeral
when all around us is true wonder
You figured out a god-given beauty in a more majestic and rather classical way. Thanks for this intelligent articulation of thoughts
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
The elements and your thoughts on them, as only you can do them, even using a new form does not deter you from doing what you do best, giving the reader a part of your soul. Very good.
Like many others had done before you, and others that you have done by yourselves...like there's nothing new under the sun...but yet...you have done this sooooo well!!! You have even outdone yourself in this one!
Great endeavour on a new style. I think I will try on this too later.
Awsome! You really brought about the notion of awakening to the realization of a dream. A sunrise, an everyday occurance, yet totally new to the eyes of the poet. Love it! ~~Carmen :-)
Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2006
So beautifully done!!!!!!!!!!!! I love when my dreams carry over and punch a whole through infinity so I can go on enjoying them
:)
He Keeps Me is a devotional journey of revelation and insight birthed out of prayer.Searching the Word of God revealed the many ways that He has kept me and continues to keep me. Each day is an opportunity to recognize that God is mindful of you, eve
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You've done a wonderful job with this form! I really liked this passage: "the beauty in a moment
can change an entire life
yet often we keep our eyes averted
seeking material things
or trying to catch the ephemeral
when all around us is true wonder"
Love & Light,
Joseph
Love Tinka
Paul;-)
Take care,
Sherry
This is beautiful and the picture is perfect.
Birgit and Roger
You rock Eileen !
Love the dreamy pic !
Peter
Carole
can change an entire life
yet often we keep our eyes averted
seeking material things
or trying to catch the ephemeral
when all around us is true wonder
WOW, Magnificent, and Brava!!
Beautiful as always.
John
I'm caught in the rapture of the morning. Very well written.
Dang, you did a graet job here; well done! Take a bow, girlfriend, and pat yourself on the back! BRAVA!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D **applauding**
Bobbi
Your dream lends itself to beautiful verse--stunning work. :) And that pic, GORGEOUS!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Great endeavour on a new style. I think I will try on this too later.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
:)