Bleeding (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2006

"hell sounds the bells bong!... what a crackingly good line for a truly well composed piece... very well done Eileen...Mark xx

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

Only true poetic magic could transform such a sense of utter despair as expressed in BLEEDING into a small soft nova of alluring intensity. The triumph here, for this reader, is in the beauty that surfaces out of the ashes of a love that supposedly has died. A classic write.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

ditto Janet's comments below. know this feeling and don't like it. makes me wish for a rainstorm of bandaids and the gentlest of hugs. prayers for you, Dawn

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

Chilling, so stark in imagery and verse...very effective writing, Eileen. Original, as well...the relation of soul to sky and stars touches on the premise of love's wonders...

I hope you decide to play among the stars.

love,
Gina

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

**** Brillaint, my sister poet ****

love joanne

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

Well this is a gloomy one, but strong imagery, Eileen. :-) Potent in its brevity. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

Painfully well expressed

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

"Bleeding into the blank sky/Dissolving yesterday's stars". This is a powerfully painful and plaintive line. Those same stars that shone so brightly with hope and new love now are now dulled by heartache and betrayal. Oh can I feel this write to my soul. Hope this is not personal. If so, we bleed with you Eileen. A prayer for healing and a new song...Lin

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

Beautifully written. Haunting and painful. This is the kind of poem that makes me physically hurt. xxxxoooo Janet

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

A very painful write Eileen, I can say from experience just move on...God has another plan for you!
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

Eileen,

Hope you are okay; you are in my prayers! Powerful, painful poem; very well expressed! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

Sometimes you just have to wait until it is truly dead to bury it and move on. It hits us like a lightning bolt out of nowhere and makes us wonder why it took us so long to see the reality of the situation.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

Okay. Now that it is over. Start living again.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

When the soul's song is severed, it truly is a most painful time; and this is one painful, powerful poem, Tiger Lily.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

Eileen
I hope you are alright...:)
Nobody is ever worth that amount of pain !
And if he is a habitual liar, you are better off without him...;)
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on March 14, 2006

I think we all have had this feeling.. well done!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 14, 2006

I can't believe this came from your pen. I hope you are OK and you are just playing with the dark side in this write.

love and hugs,

George

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on March 14, 2006

Hard and painful poem. GBQ

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 14, 2006

painful yet sincere in its intent ...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 14, 2006

Oh this touched big time!!

Thanks!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on March 14, 2006

So dark, so heavy, almost deeply depressing. Now we have to find another more happier one from you. We hope it does not reflect the way you feel, just in case, we do it like Karla, keep you in our thoughts and prayers.
Love, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 14, 2006

(((Eileen)))

Darkness and sadness perfectly conveyed--you're in my thoughts and prayers.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on March 14, 2006

Dear Eileen
"...No oxygen,love finally dies
Together with all the lies.."
No worthy air, and lies, are certainly the ingredients to allow love to die. Thankfully, 'true' love doesn't die, but is reborn continually!
Let us find this true love post haste! Powerful write!
Love, Suzie xox :-D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 14, 2006

A heavy one here, Eileen, almost sounds depressing...Rufuz won't like hearing any depressive thoughts from you...Ed