Forever Twilight (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on April 4, 2006

The picture, the music and your words, enchanting!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 2, 2006

Absolutely fabulous, Eileen...the perfect time of day
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 2, 2006

so beautiful.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 2, 2006

Eileen,

This is my new favorite of yours. Most eloquent, beautiful poem--thank you. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on April 2, 2006

This poem is full of shine from your spirit to your pen. This is a favorite for me.
Susan

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on April 2, 2006

I love the times when the change occurs as though light and dark were guards switching shifts. Sunrises and sunsets seem to bring promise of the beauty of day or of night, either seems to be a warm blessing. Beautiful poetry, Eileen.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2006

Drat! I hate it when that happens. Fine form. As always.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 2, 2006

Oooo yes... I just love the twilight and that end-of-day tussle twixt light and dark. Don't know quite why, but it is the summertime periods of slooooooooow lengthening shadows and nights that are barely dark at all that this poetic dance reminds me of: "liquid darkness", I call it. The last couplet was a "twist" for me and made me smile; made me think Cinderella, coaches and pumpkins, dammit!! :)) K xx

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2006

"I must find ways to requite
the light that goes astray"

Oh, how I've missed your ease with internal rhyme, Eileen. With this poem, I realized something else: I often 'hear' this when it isn't, in fact, even there... such is your skill in creating "word sounds" that fill my imagination. The last two lines are among my fav's. katy xox

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on April 2, 2006

The ultimate fight, between dark and light--nice metaphor. Hope that fever has subsided.

Ron

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 2, 2006

Life is a battle between the darkness and the light but as Christ has said I am the way, the truth, and the light and with Him to guide us all darkness can be dispelled.

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on April 2, 2006

A beam of pure light shown through to all of us just days ago and now darkness intrudes again. Seems we're either chasing our shadows or they are chasing us. But can't have one without the other and the sun will soon appear. Beautiful write, Eileen, as is the music...

Lin

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on April 2, 2006

A lovely calming piece this one Eileen.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on April 2, 2006

lovely work

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 2, 2006

Great ofering Eileen..love it!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on April 2, 2006

" Just a walk at twilight...when the lights are low.."...
Twilight is my most favorite time, Eileen..
Absolutely beautiful
Peter