The unusual rain at this time in California has me posting this one
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In the darkness under the eucalyptus tree you slowly undressed me clouds and wind made it a stormy night our mood was set to ignite air heavy with threat of rain did not cause us to refrain our passions were set on fire as you played with my desire kissing each place you made bare making me feel like a cinder our lips had a tasty tour in all the places they adore nature sang sweet harmonies while the breeze sang in the trees lightning joined my yell for more thunder couldn't match your roar the moment when the rains came in joyous unison we did the same~v~
good poem, how are the levees? keeping my eye on the news ... Isabella Dam is much in news in Bakerfield.
You can take the kid out of California, but you cannot take California out of the kid.
Augh Yeh!!! My kind of passion coming with the raw emotion rich in performance and treatise between two. You've made my night, I love reading about the inward beauty that comes when one's animation of love spits out in a poem. My dear....you've captured that moment.
Susan
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
Nice flow.
Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
As always you shine with your masterpieces, Eileen. Thanks so much for sharing..
Eileen
You have the incredible and undoubted talent of interlacing passion with nature seamlessly and effortlessly..
And California seems to be getting better renowned these days for its continous rain...;)
Love
Peter
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Been raining everyday in england since I landed here.......very depressing weather indeed!!
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Birgit and Roger
love and peace, Carole
Take care,
Sherry
You can take the kid out of California, but you cannot take California out of the kid.
Susan
xxxx dove
You have the incredible and undoubted talent of interlacing passion with nature seamlessly and effortlessly..
And California seems to be getting better renowned these days for its continous rain...;)
Love
Peter