Him -a string -senryu/haiku (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 11, 2006

good one

Reviewed on June 9, 2006

Beautiful done, Eileen. Especially the last three lines are some to always remember!
Love, B&R

Reviewed on June 8, 2006

"Creator feels sad
Wishing to restore humans
To the ways of love" Glorious Eileen!
All of these are precious ... your loving heart shaped these kus/rus with master strokes!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 8, 2006

Eileen
This an excellent collection of haikus
most enjoyable
thanks for sharing

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Reviewed on June 8, 2006

Awesome choice of words. Good write, Eileen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 8, 2006

Each one a gem, Eileen and the whole offering is a wonderful poetic gift that is truly appreciated. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on June 8, 2006

Deeply thoughtful and beautiful gems, all! I'm disturbed by the vengeful and angry view of God that some cling to. These speak of
his tender love for us and His reflection in all of nature, every element in tune with natural laws which He set forth and which we stubbornly refuse to follow and thus suffer the consequence that we
like to think is punishment...

Lin

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 8, 2006

This is gorgeous, Eileen; very well done! BRAVA!

((((HUGS)))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on June 8, 2006

Very beautiful Eileen!

A deep expression of respect and awe for the Creator.

"Humanity hides" is a very insightful two words.

So true, how easy it is to form our own philosophies about life and spiritual things, and how easily most get deluded in their understanding of anything except their own lusts.

If God took away our free will for thirty seconds and allowed everyone a glimpse into the spirit realm, I am quite sure that no one would have any problems believing.

Great write
Richard

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2006

"Let the floods clap their hands: let the hills be joyful together
Before the LORD.." Psa 98:7-8
Wow, Eileen! This one's a keeper!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on June 8, 2006

A beautiful string of jewels of wisdom...
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Amy Avatar (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2006

Lovely string of
perfectly cut words...
Amy Ramdass

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on June 8, 2006

Wonderful string of pearls, Eileen! I especially like:

"The landscape awaits
The touch of Creator's hand
In reverent awe"

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on June 8, 2006

Eileen
You delight us all with this superlative string of senryus...
I love the last one...
" He sends a message
Love is the beauty of life
Made for all to share "
Peter

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on June 8, 2006

And you are the beauty of nature and its endowments. A perfect way to express the power of the creator. GBQ
Abdi-Noor

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2006

A personal note of sorts to the One who makes it all possible. Good.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on June 7, 2006

Such wonder in the creation by the creator, such splendor in the way you express it.

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on June 7, 2006

There is such power in all of creation...the shore an inspiration to his handiwork, the earth,the sea and the sky...an incredible nut tangible reminder that "Love is the beauty of life
Made for all to share"...I love the sheer and calming simplicity in this piece.
Taylor

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2006

(((Eileen ))) your a true voice for the prophetic movement dear angel..I love you

Dove ~

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 7, 2006

sadly, a message most of mankind cannot hear ...

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on June 7, 2006

I flre today in a private jet and I wish I had this poem with me. The heavens were closer and the earth below showed the division of man and space and you captured it as though you were there along with us.
Susan