Bits and pieces of thread Various colors interwoven Sewn with love and hate Cross stitched in mixed messages Despair and hope throughout War, peace, and pipe dreams Lots of pain, misery and confusion With overlays of compassionate love Happiness braided with sadness The design a disturbing hodgepodge One would imagine it to be unsightly Instead it became a beautiful collectible With vibrant colors superbly crafted Into a timeless tapestry called life
it's a mystery how life, with all its mixed messages, disappointments and dead ends, becomes so beautiful a thing. splendid poem with equally attractive artwork. Dawn
"Cross-stitched in mixed messages" says it about right, Eileen. Life can definitely turn us in different directions over the course of our lives and yet, life, itself, is so beautiful. Brilliant write.
Tye dyed and bushey tailed write from the 70's to now complete. I can appreciate this time-line verse since I'm a daughter of the 70's.
Great verse with the colors of living.
Susan
Thanks, I have to believe that was for me, as every one does, with your heartfelt writes.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2006
Ah, Eileen, if I were a horror writer (some thing all my novels are a horror LOL) this is the gem of a premise for a plot, something out of Twilight Zone. Since I don't write horror (really) I can only say that you have come up with a fantastic idea for poetry. Good reading.
It's wonderful the way you write. I am in awe of how you come up with these creations seemingly so easily. I sure don't. Thank you for allowing us to share of your creative soul, Eileen. Love and peace to you,
Ron
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
it's a mystery how life, with all its mixed messages, disappointments and dead ends, becomes so beautiful a thing. splendid poem with equally attractive artwork. Dawn
You've woven a beautiful piece here. You really captured what each of our lives is made of.
Love & Light,
Joseph
With vibrant colors superbly crafted
Into a timeless tapestry called life
These words ring true with this thought. Thanks for sharing...
Love,
Jill
Great verse with the colors of living.
Susan
Love, B&R
Regis
As the saying goes " It takes all kinds to make a world "...
You have stitched together a classic piece on the multi layers and dimensions of the game of life..
Excellent pen !
Peter