She couldn't help but eat his words They are so delicious She loves to swallow all his poetry It is very nutritious She spreads her bread with his rhyme It tastes divine His eloquent prose flows so smoothly she sips it like wine He voices verbs with naughty nips Her senses come alive Each phrase deftly kisses her lips Makes her body thrive He pacifies her petulance with pronouns Making no pretense His romantic genre seductive and sensual Uses no past tense He is her adored poet for all time, Always pleasing her in meter and rhyme
What a meal, Eileen! This is a well-crafted and unique poem that certainly serves to show others the world that we writers enjoy. Perfect, as always! ;-)
I hope you are doing better,
Jill
Delightfully delicious and intriguing. However odd it may seem, I have never been attracted to writers in a romantic sense. This is really quite strange since I love words, conversation and writing. Perhaps I have always found reading someone's writings to be too personal, showing their vulnerability and perhaps I sensed that I would know too much of their inner soul, from the gate, to be comfortable starting a romantic relationship with them. It is like having an unfair advantage or holding the trump card; I would always wonder if I would, at some point, find a way to use it to my own advantage or worse, against them. Wonderful, wonderful poem, Eileen.
This certainly seems like a blessed tribute to a mystery person chum. But for the life of me it seems like an analogy about something mysterious. Maybe I'm just coo-coo!
I am curious too ...who who who...?I also have a favorite whom I adore so I can really relate to your lovely tribute.As for the lady poets on the site two are my top favorites,you are one of them and Joyce McInnes the other (she's my mother so that's why she's my number one favorite....'the heart has reasons...')I love your poem Eileen.
Best wishes always
From
kay.
Love the write...hooked me the first line...she loves to eat his words..great write, very creative, and a great tribute to a favorite poet.
Blessing,
Joyce Bowling
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
Ah, but this is a breath of fresh air! Very Nice, God Bless, Holly
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
Beautiful piece about the favorite Poet.
"He is her adored poet for all time,
Always pleasing her in meter and rhyme"
Excellent Eileen............
Peace,
Joselyn
Love,
Taylor
Ron
enjoyed this tasty treat
Love to you Eileen!
Love, Suzie :-D
Great to see you writing more...just take care.
Micke
I hope you are doing better,
Jill
Hope you are doing much better Eileen, good to read you again.
Hugs
Cherry
Take care,
Sherry
Myrna
"He is her adored poet for all time,
Always pleasing her in meter and rhyme"
"Her Favorite Poet" Wholly wonderful!
Take good care, dear Eileen...
Love,
Sheila
Carole
Hope you get as well as you can
in 2007.
love poetry about other poets
good to see you back
Love & Peace
William
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Wonderful imagery and passion in your words today; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Regis
Love Tinka
Praying your days here in 2007 are lovely and healthy ones.
Take care and continued blessings to you.
~Gwendolyn
Best wishes always
From
kay.
hope your new year was great,
peace, love and happiess
Who is this Bard?
Love,
Susan
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Love,
CJ
If it be her favorite poet I'm glad you chose meter and rhyme for his forte. This one cradles the senses.
ROFl...love it.
Elizabeth
Blessing,
Joyce Bowling
"He is her adored poet for all time,
Always pleasing her in meter and rhyme"
Excellent Eileen............
Peace,
Joselyn