Our Dual Natures (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 11, 2007

you formed this well Eileen, couldn't have been done better with clay, what else can I say

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

good to see you are still pumping out masterpieces
dare I dream of more

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

Never let go of those dreams, Eileen...thank God you can out them all back together again. Thanks for sharing a bit of your ration with us...
Much love,
Taylor~

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

My God, girl! What you do in those two 15-min segments! No compromising in this work of art!

Now REST!

Micke

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

You did this in thirty minutes? You're a genius, a minx, but still a genius. Victor

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

Lovely write. Thank you From Joyce McInnes

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

2 fifteen minute segments? WOW chum! I would probably just stay off the doggone thing. Can't accomplish much in that amount of time. Your write is wisdom filled, the kind that comes from experience and struggle. Stand strong dear heart, you are loved!

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

Dang, Eileen, that is worse than at our hour time limit here at the library! Powerful write you have penned here; exceptionally well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

(((Eileen))),

That's worse than the hour time limit per day on our local library's computer!! (Have 18 minutes left.) Powerfully penned, you did this in 15 minutes???????? Gad. You, my dear, are quite the talent in showing us God's blessings in the midst of sickness or trial. Well done!

(((((gentle HUGS))))), much love, and many prayers, Karla.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

Beautiful and inspirational Eileen...may prayers surround you like a shaw and healing come swiftly...
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

well, here's something to keep in mind. I truly believe your willingness to use even a part of your 15-minute stints to post this kind of incredible human poetry that helps us all know more of ourselves and more of God will be returned to you as blessings magnified. here you have articulated something so familiar to me in a way so fresh and in a manner that puts the focus where it should be, on God's redeeming grace and higher purpose for our lives. love and healing, Dawn

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

Eileen, you're a strong woman, and I admire that fine quality about you,God Bless you as you continue with your words of healing and wisdon, love Holly

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

No matter the amount of time you can contribute, its that amount of time we look forward to seeing and reading of you...stay strong...Ed & Rufuz...

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

It's a daily battle
That for me it's fought minute by minute
Quite honestly written with such a line as
"I don my moral mask
Now I'm up to the task."
And close it appropriately in the last two lines.
Which are extraordinary!
I was taken to 2 Corinthians 4:7-18
DWB

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

Love the last paragraph Eileen..
Hope your time limit will be
much more soon.
Love your writes.
Get better best you can.
x0x0x0x0x

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

This is well written, beautiful and inspiring, Eileen...only two 15 minute stints at the computer??? I couldn't even get my banking done in that amount of time, let alone all my e-mail...and posting poetry, that would be impossible. I hope you regain more strength so that you can do more of the things you enjoy during your days.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

This is very hopeful and full of your romantic heart. It will come to pass as you have a spirit with gusto and focused for the future.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

Eileen,

Enjoyed your poem. In a sort of way all of humanity has two sides or masks to don as you say.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

Eileen a very inspirational piece. Prayers surrounding you!!!!
Blessings,
Joselyn

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

You carry us thru the ever changing life and deposit us at the Lord's feet.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

Great write Eileen..hope your time will be extended soon!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

luv the last verse, ET ... great poem ...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

15 minutes...2X?
You should be suffering withdrawal!

Aside from that...lovely work.

My favorite lines "...We run rampant through life
in happiness and strife
it is inherent in us to learn
as spirits lift, fall, and turn
ever evolving into finality..."

Says it all.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

That was a perfect picture of a persons stuggle between body, mind ans spirit. I really enjoyed that poem.