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A Shamans Decision
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He stood firm facing the wind  his long grey streaked hair spread out like a fan
his lean muscular body showing no signs yet, of his ill health


A stoic look on his well chiseled face
with which he hoped to keep hidden
his condition from the rest of the tribe


A Shaman leader,who can heal others, but not himself , loses his effectiveness,and in
some cases the trust of his peers


It leaves the door open to those who
want his position to make a case for it
but  he wasn't ready to relinquish his
power just yet


Gazing over his beloved land,the majestic mountains,the spectacular waterfalls,the trees that reached proudly towards the heavens


His people whom he dearly loved,the horses the other animals,all of the reasons he preferred the outdoors, keeping the  ancient ways of his ancestors


So proud that in this modern age he had convinced his tribe to maintain the old
ways, while being successful with their winery, among other produce


The Wappo tribe had been in the Napa
Valley from when it was first discovered,  it was only fitting that they now lived off the land and prospered...it was called a paradise by the first settlers who saw it...


A river flowed through the valley, provided life giving water ,fresh fishes.A great variety of fruits, nuts and berries,and all the wildlife one could want for hunting


Of course it proved to be superb for vineyards,which produced great wines
and this is  their main source of income  today


As Malachi pondered how much time was left to him,perhaps another year,he had already chosen whom he wanted for his succsessor


He contentedly enjoyed the scenes from the past that danced before his vision,as he stood with renewed zest to make sure he would leave the people he loved with the best of everything...


etw


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 Reviews of "A Shamans Decision"
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2007
Beautiful rendering of his sadness and his memory/dream. Accurate, too. Napa Valley is gorgeous. I wonder how many of its residents know it has a fascinating history from before folks like Beringer moved in (about 125 years ago)? Need more poems like this!

Ted

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
noble and proud, you've described him well

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on February 4, 2007
Very engaging, Eileen. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 3, 2007
conceptually profound and well written ... does a shaman lose his effectiveness by not healing himself? or does he show his tribe that even as he helps to heal others, he takes on his tribe's afflictions onto himself ...

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2007
Dear Eileen,

The ability to hand the baton on to the next, knowing that we'd given our all, must be very fulfilling. Each and every link has its own purpose in reaching the final goal.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2007
An excellent story Eileen, all the best to you, love Holly

Reviewed on February 2, 2007
great

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on February 2, 2007
Eileen, I loved this!

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
Reviewed on February 2, 2007
Thank you for this wonderful story Eileen. I loved reading it. Like your work always is; It's great. Regards Joyce

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 2, 2007
Very well written!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on February 2, 2007
A powerful write my friend, enjoyed this one the Shaman culture is fascinating and one in which we could learn much from. Enjoyed this one much!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 2, 2007
Excellent pen,Hugssssssssssss

Reviewed by Jorge Vicente (Reader)
Reviewed on February 2, 2007
So wonderful, Eileen. I confess I have a deep passion for shamanism and shamanic culture. And I believe we could learn so much by reading stories like this.

Thank you for sharing
Jorge

Reviewed on February 2, 2007
Wonderful write, and very informative!!!!!! A well-researched piece, Eileen!!!!! Thank you so much for sharing!!!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 2, 2007
A marvelous story, Tiger Lily, and I truly believe these shamans could teach us much today. I also sadly just read that Global Warming may even adversely affect Napa Valley's wine production very soon. Truly, truly sad.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2007
I agree with paul Eileen your written abilities are massive. I enjoyed reading this one.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 1, 2007
Eileen,

Your a very diversified writer and that's what makes you so unique. Your talent shines my friend.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on February 1, 2007
This was excellent Eileen, I had read up on the Wappo tribe sometime back when time was more free. I have always loved the past...

Allen

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on February 1, 2007
The power of the shaman plus the power of an exceptional poet's pen makes extaordinary magic indeed. A truly wonderful write from its sketch of the nature of the shaman to its historical and cultural context.
Aberjhani

Reviewed on February 1, 2007
Excellent, Eileen; very well done! BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Yuppers, more stuff to add to the Eileen Files! Worth reading again and again! :)

Reviewed on February 1, 2007
Oh, Eileen,

I felt this one shiver straight to my bones. P O W E R F U L L Y penned message in this one--yes. Another keeper to the Walron file!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on February 1, 2007
A picture of a true utopian existance.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on February 1, 2007
I am coming back to read this one again.This subject is very close to my heart.Excellent !
Love from
kay

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2007
Nice storetry, it does read novelette type thingy..

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on February 1, 2007
And what more could he ask?
Paint his war mask
He knew this battle would be his last.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on February 1, 2007
Great write Sugar Chum. Interesting that he had the same name as the last book of the Old Testament. Hope you are doing well.

Light and Wisdom and Love ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Debra Harmes-Kurth (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2007
Interesting in the historic sense, and I enjoyed the storyline in this poem. Such a proud man he was, and yet his concern his people. I liked this piece.
debra

Reviewed by Joy Marsh
Reviewed on February 1, 2007
Interesting and beautiful piece. Nicely done! Enjoyed reading this.

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2007
Great characterisation.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 1, 2007
Wonderful write on a man with much wisdom. Reads just like a novel.


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