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One Night at the Lake
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The intensity of the beam surprised
my eyes as it became one with the
lake I felt its power as I swam back
to shore, to the fire and my friends 
 
I was captivated by the path the
moonmade on the water, wondering
if they spoke to each other

I thought the vibration I had felt
in the water when I passed the
moonbeam, was  caused by their
method of communication


My friends called me to join the
circle and story telling around
the fire,but I told them I wanted
to rest a bit while drying


I lay there watching the path
the moon made in the water
suddenly a shadowy  figure
appeared on it walking towards me


I was mesmerized,as it came closer 
it whispered "the water and moon
share the same tune,just as you do
when you talk to Creator!"


Then I realized I had dozed off
and must have dreamed the vison
but as I told my friends it made
perfect sense to me


Later  before getting in bed  I looked
out the window to say goodnight to
lake and moon, I felt their answers
within me croon

etw

 

 

 

 

 
 
  
 
 
 

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 Reviews of "One Night at the Lake"
Reviewed on February 7, 2007


"One Night at the Lake"
Beautiful indeed, I enjoyed the serenity and mystique offered in this poem and the teaming of the graphics again is outstanding!

All the best to you,
From the Heart of an Artist...

Reviewed on February 7, 2007
Deeply inspiring! This is a collective prayer involving all kinds of creatures, praising the lord for giving us what we have
thanks eileen and god Bless you queen
Abdi-Noor

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
evokes inspired thoughts and emotions ... i hope the answers were revealing and the visions complete ...

delightful rendering ...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
Beautiful and peaceful, Eileen, this poem is the soothing balm I needed this evening to finish off my difficult and very busy day. I hope you are recovering well.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
truly nice and pleasant. what a photo! many thanks

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
A lovely and mystical write, Eileen. Very nice work -- I enjoyed reading this very much.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
Beautiful and so spiritual the effect of this one. Wonderful poetry inspiring for me.

Peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
Beautiful write my friend, a mystical vision indeed! I think the Lord speaks to us in many ways...such as your dream! Loved this one very comforting, and uplifting. Inspiring indeed!
Blessings,
Joyce B...

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
A captivating poem Eileen, love Holly

Reviewed on February 6, 2007
Pretty picture and poem, Eileen, definitely top drawer! BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
Divinely lovely, Looking at the moons reflection in a lake or mirrored see is real tranquillity

Reviewed by S J (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
This is lovely, Eileen! Each line is enriching, and your profound words touched my soul. The art is magnificent, and your poem is exquisite! You are the Queen of poetry.

Thank you
Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
God speaks to us in many ways. The secret is to listen.
One Night at the Lake shares great insight and offers a lesson for us all. A meaningful, wonderful write.

Reviewed on February 6, 2007
Beautiful, beautiful lines encompass this reader in comfort: thank you, (((Eileen))), you just keep soaring higher and higher with inspiring, inspired verse!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
Looking at the pic; a night like that could conjure up all sorts of imaginations.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
what a wonderful thought...that the lake and the moon communicate...touch

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
Wonderful offering..thanks for sharing!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
it made
perfect sense to me

Then I'd say you were extremely fortunate, Tiger Lily.

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
Beautiful and hallucinating. Victor

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
Reviewed on February 5, 2007
The vibration from the full moon is a powerful thing. It sounds like you were right on the wave. And what a beautiful picture... Joyce

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on February 5, 2007
A wonderful vision. Always a joy to read your work.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 5, 2007
And what were you smoking that night, young lady...though I know better...what a beautiful memory you must have and to know or think that He did talk to you directly...if you know him that well, put in a good word for me, as Rufuz is too good already...Ed

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on February 5, 2007
the vision quest is often taken in nature where the message can be clearly presented

very nice and compelling

thanks,
~D.


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