He came forward in a ray of light Diving into her in deepest night There were no cymbals There were no songs Just bodies merging Into where they belonged
He was dressed in moonlight With stars as a halo uniting Them in lights brilliant glow Her power drew him into Her waves of wonder, that Mated with his firmament
Her oceanic forces matched his Sky and ocean filled with devotion Married by Creator to give new Horizons to future generations Heavenly passion came to earth Filling humanity with new worth
I'm sure you know that your poem beautifully mirrors many of the tribal creation mythologies, featuring Father Sky and Mother Sea. Wonderful stories, and your poem tells it even better! Great one, Eileen!
Ted
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2007
Dear Eileen,
I've always loved that place where sky meets sea ... it's a good place to be lost for a while, either alone or, especially, with someone special.
Glorious thoughts dear sugar chum. An exceptional feeling and atmosphere that you've created in this write. I hope you are doing well and are on the mend.
Light and Wisdom and Love ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
You always seem to have the right words
with the right picture.
I really liked the flow on this one.
"Heavenly passion came to earth
Filling humanity with new worth."
What an ending!
DWB
I do miss watching the sunset into the sea, Eileen. If New Mexico had an ocean, it would be the perfect place to live...alas, I must settle for all the rest, at least until the "big one" when New Mexico becomes the new coastline. Beautiful poem!!
Take care,
Sherry
As only Eileen can write this so skillfully, creatively, and beautifullt!!!!! Wonderful poem, Eileen!!!!!!
Sandie May Angel :o)
P.S. I have trouble in reviewing this. Everything I've typed began in the middle of the page; but being the wizard I am, I've beaten it, and posted my review. Not really sure what is wrong with the den.
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Ted
I've always loved that place where sky meets sea ... it's a good place to be lost for a while, either alone or, especially, with someone special.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
thank you for this dawn of love
Well Penned
Love & Peace
William
love and peace, Carole
Light and Wisdom and Love ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
You are a visionary Eileen!
Love Tinka
with the right picture.
I really liked the flow on this one.
"Heavenly passion came to earth
Filling humanity with new worth."
What an ending!
DWB
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
A lovely, captivating union, indeed, beautifully penned. Exquisite!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Ahhh, a timely masterpiece for such a time as this!
"Sky weds Ocean" mmmm, that title within itself I adore.
Blessings Eileen and continuance in your strength dear one,
~Gwendolyn
Filling humanity with new worth
Marvelous poetic words, Tiger Lily, and we truly need some heavenly passion and new worth, these days.
With God and Nature as one how can we go wrong. A beautiful creation my friend.
always,
randy
Love,
CJ
Take care,
Sherry
Sandie May Angel :o)
P.S. I have trouble in reviewing this. Everything I've typed began in the middle of the page; but being the wizard I am, I've beaten it, and posted my review. Not really sure what is wrong with the den.
peace,
carolyn
Love,
Susan