Dance With Me (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 14, 2007

"Two people in one movement
Breathing simultaneous, heavy
Mating to the melody
Love is happening"

I can feel the sway. Oh yeah...I got into this one Eileen.

Love, Taylor

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

sometimes i have problems with my eyes also, that is, keeping them open ...

well penned ...

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

enjoyed the read

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Glad I got to read this poem. I like! I like! Hope your eyes are better soon. Blessings!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Just Beautiful..Hugssss

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Clever formatting on this one dear sugar chum. There is a lot of heart felt emotion in this write. 2002? WOW! Peace and Blessings to you!

Light and Wisdom ...

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Magnifique Eileen
loved this must try it someday
Thanks for sharing

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Two individuals dancing as one... ...beautiful image brought to mind and sentiments to heart; thank you, Eileen. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

I can only echo J. Allen's words, and add my wishes for the
full recovery of your sight.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Splendid write Eileen, and may your sight return in its wholeness.

Allen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

(((((Eileen)))))

Hope all goes well with your eyes; you're in my prayers.

However, you've penned a beautiful ode to romance in colorful imagery and emotion; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Hope your eyes are feeling better, Eileen; seems that it hasn't affected your ability to post! Good for that! Wonderful writings, uniquely and very well presented as always~! You are in my prayers, sweetie!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

A dance between two is such an exciting prelude to romance, a girl has just gotta love a man who can dance! These are each beautiful, Eileen and you capture the intrigue that is always present when we watch other couples dance. There is lots of swirling motion in your verses and I could see myself there, first watching then caught in a teasing romance of my own.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Did you know that if you see colours to music, you are very gifted in the art..

Save me the last dance...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Great offering Eileen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Eileen,

Excellent style and form. The dance and the poetry.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

love that tango, too!
nicely done, eileen.
take good care of those eyes,
carolyn

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

Rufuz & I wish your eyes to get better soonest...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Linda Murray

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

E.T. I always love your poetry.
Thanks for Sharing.
Linda

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

A Charming piece. Very enjoyable...JM

Reviewed by Richard Orey

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

WOWIE! Like they say, close only counts in horseshoes, hand grenades...and slow dancing!

I'm breathin' heavy. I love to dance. Sometimes I don't even wait for the music. Or is it that I'm so engaged I'm not listening to anything but the beat of her heart?

Great verse, ET. You've obviously been there.
Richard

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

wishing your eyes better...this is a wonderful poetic visual

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

'Dance With Me' is as precious as you! God Bless you Eileen, love Holly

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

A wonderfil repost Eileen your eyes and I just lost the left side of my whole arm for a few weeks today. Will have to catch up also with posts... I enjoyed this poem prayers take care.
Joselyn

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

When I dance, I feel no inhibitions, this is the freedom you talk about! The emotions flow with your septets...
Love this~
Love and peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

A sensuous poem so well done in this medium. I hope your eyes get better.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

Give me a s-l-o-w dance every time. Your pen sways all the many dances as your heart thumps to each beat. Great spinning of love.
You're the best Sis. Your eyes will be better as your heart sees the core.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

A sensuous write,my kinda dance,Excellent
Michael