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Moon Rider
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trying to sleep mind wandering
I notice a shaft of moonlight
from window above my bed
it is reflected in dresser mirror
on wall at foot of bed


I'm mesmerized by the mirror
showing shadows in various forms
I feel as if something infiltrates me
a gust of wind through the window
makes me shiver as I feel myself


being pulled through the window
by some motivational force like
the moon that changes the tides
and though I'm still in bed I can see
myself in the mirror by the moon


I have black silken wings which
seem to be controlled by the moon
or is there someone or thing working
me like a puppet on a string,I sense
a masculine presence,but can see no one


then I surrender to the sensation of total
weightlessness as I soar higher into the sky
in an orbit around the moon,hearing the
beautiful chanting of  unseen voices,and
one whispers, "Sleep now,all is well!"


etw-2007


 


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 Reviews of "Moon Rider"
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 7, 2007
An alluring fanciful write. Its texture is soft and as I read it , I feel peace with in....M

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
an enchanting write, a bit mystical and very well written! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on June 5, 2007
Enchanting experience, Eileen....never question the powers of that mystical Man in the Moon...but tell him to cease with the fly rod thing..ouch! His midnight kisses would be much better to sleep by!
Love,
Taylor

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 4, 2007
Some dream, some picture. Wish I had that last night when my ingrown toe and absent wisdom tooth competed with dystreflexia to keep me squirming until thunder that never materialized into rain made anticipation worse.

Ron

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
Eileen, what an enchanting piece to celebrate the Blue Moon...a child's naive sense of receiving comfort meets the whimsical woman's wishes in this...

love,
Gina

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
Beautifully done. Lady J

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
Awwwww.....awesome read....got completely moonstrucked by this one!!

LoveTinka (howling)

:o

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
Lovely vision and sensations Sugar Chum. Mysterious imagery.

I must admit I had a similar experience some months back. The sensation of being pulled through the open bedroom window was accompanied by a blanket of goosepimples and a sharp pain in my right shoulder. Awakening suddenly, I realized that the guy next door was practicing his fly-fishing and had accidentally hooked my night-shirt near the shoulder. Imagine my surprise! (-: Peace out chickadee!

Light and Wisdom and Love ...

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
etw,
Great write! Your imagination paints a very vivid picture, so good that I could see all this happening in my mind's eye. Enjoyed..

Peace,
George

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
Truly captivating, Moon Rider! Fly On!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
Yes I was on the hoof, but glad you took the advise...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Intriguingly mystifying, enjoyed.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
lovly way to drift away

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Great visual. Loved it.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Eileen, all is well when you write
your beautiful verse. Very nice!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
All is well :-) Love the way you write!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Reminds me of the Peter Pan show I use to
view when young.
How wonderful this is, and
the picture is gorgeous.
Smooooo0000ch!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
... wish I looked like that when I look at myself in bed in the mirror! :)) I like this, Eileen... like being pulled in through the eye of a telescope... kinda "Beam me up, Scottie". A soothing and dream-sowing lullaby of thoughts to drift to sleep on, for certain sure. LOL K xx

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Sleeping and flying could be like drinking and driving, you might fly right into the moon...;) ed

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Mr. Sandman caught you. Great poem and pic, You capture the reader with your great imagery and place him outside looking in.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
awesome sensation here pulls the reader into it

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
What a wonderful 'moon ride' and the picture is great to.

Thanks,
Dan


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