In the bosom of my dream
A surrealistic scenario ensues
Bedazzled royal curtains gleam
Drip crystal vowels, to enthuse
Sparkling like snow, words appear
Some with sentiments to amuse
Or to make the eyes shed tears
While others meant to accuse
A fantasy told in brilliant color
With vibrant verbs, enthrall
Some dark somber metaphor
Where phantoms come to call
In lyrical rhythm like fire and ice
Well phrased in golden glow
Erotic offerings arouse and entice
Dripping with honeyed flow
Amidst radiant jewels poetic muse
Ruby Flames of a poet, shows
panorama of natures views
Pearl like prolific prose, flows
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Happy Fourth to you and yours; stay safe and have FUN!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
GORGEOUS perfection in sparkling lines! Well done, my (((friend))).
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love Tinka
Well done.
Georg
cheers,
carolyn
Amor
Be safe,
Karen
Love,
Susan
Thanks for sharing.
Patricia
So you have Aladins cave!
...and a "panorama of natures views
Pearl like prolific prose, flows"...it sure does Eileen!
A beauty of a gem, this fine poem is full of vibrancy!
Ron
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Written by a poetess possessing a poetic muse
With the brilliance of a diamond!!
Outstanding Jeweled of a poem!
Love Peace and Joy to you always..Yolie
Richard
love & peace
William
Thanks,
Dan
What can I say bu "exquisite!" That's actually an understatment because I don't believe I've read many poems on this site that have BOTH metaphors AND similes. Excellent expressive write! WOW!!
George