Where I Want To Be (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 19, 2007

Your heart fly to many realms being many places in moments of time. You are a gifted and talented Writer. Having a spirit that soars to heights never ending. Lovely Write.

Reviewed by Alexandra Midnight (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2007

Very good. I know that I am not where I want to be but I am working on who I want to be I belive that after finding who you truly are can you truley be where you want to be.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 12, 2007

When we have the luxury of the time to think, we get restless. I say, see and do all you can, for God's heaven will be a bland and boring place.

Ron

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2007

Great pen here. I too at this age wonder if I'll ever find a real home. I have moved on an average every couple of years. I want to find a spot to call home yet still want to roam all over...not much to ask for. Great write and great picture. Lady J

Reviewed by Super Girl

Reviewed on August 12, 2007

I like this restlessness. It lets us explore as much of living as possbile. Although I never thought of how it helps us to be in two places at once. That is kind of a cool thought. ~ Sara

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

well done

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

You raise a question and offer the answer ... beyond wise, Eileen. Thank you.

Gina

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

Oh beautiful the ending perfection. We are not of here says the Spirit of God those that believe in eternal Salvation and unto God are sealed so I think we are yes roamers in a land not called home.

Blessed reading this Eileen!!!!!
Blessings & peace In Christ Jesus
Joselyn

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

Wow, I stand and applaud this poem Eilene!!! "Thou hast created us for Thyself, and our heart is restless til it rests in Thee. Maybe we feel misplaced until the trip in this life is done. Or maybe it's not knowing what it is we are supposed to do here. I perfer the first. Either way, this poem hit me square in the gut!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

compassion to this piece, being of nomad heart myself, yet knowing not my own brothers who are completely rooted and satisfied being so, perhaps it is not DNA but the self and soul which finds satisfaction within the nomatic exploration of sacred places...for the creator exists where ever I am and i do not sense seeking or searching, but moreso personal experience and witness to its wonder

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

Wonderful write, peaceful and heartfelt....enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

Go where your heart takes you
It doesn't matter where as long is
Where you want to be!!
Love your tone and chosen words
Excellent write!!
Love Peace and Hugsss to you....Yolie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

Wonderful write, eileen; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Missy Cross (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

Oh, I so agree. Very thoughtful treatise and this earthbound misfit knows exactly how you feel. Nicely done!

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

Roam wherever the heart takes you for wherever you are, there God is. That is all you have to acknowledge, for God can be adored anywhere and your heart will or rather must rest in Him. Fine poem, Eileen. Victor

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

No matter where we wander, we take ourselves with us.
Enjoyed this one, Eileen.

Love,
Bette

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

Nice...are we ever "there?"

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

Eileen,

Beautifully penned, you pen the Magyar gyspy spirit well! Have a bit of the wandering spirit meself, just can't afford to go. So, I write, and open up books to brand new worlds: I can go ANYWHERE. :) Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

Powerful writing sweet lady,as always well done....stay safe and well...Hugssss
Love,
Chanti Lace

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

My body is often where I want to be, but my mind is usually zipping all around the galaxy, chasing God knows who, and looking for answers to God knows what. But it's always nice when I can get them together for awhile.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

The writings of the English Quakers are very helpful in understanding this same question, "Where I Want To Be." To accomplish any kind of creativity, one must direct themselves to orientation of higher spiritual lands far away from freeway signs...I have cultivated the spirit of contentment you see in this picture...I live this same scene in reality every day here in the high Colorado mountains where the life of the mind and the arts reach higher than anywhere, where I have established peace and harmony...one has to have consciousness of all distractions and wrong movements for higher spiritual living...you'll find that place soon, Eileen...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

indeed St. Augustine had the definitive answer but as for me I am content with my lot.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

So many feel this restlessness...I have sufferred it also...but I love the way you wrote this.
Amor

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on August 10, 2007

Me thinks you may be right my friend! I can never sit still, yearning to be someplace else, yet when I get there my mind has already raced on......

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on August 10, 2007

Deep thoughts and wisdom. GBQ

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on August 10, 2007

What a beautiful picture of our quest for peaceful waters.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on August 10, 2007

very deep and thought inspiring write-i enjoyed this very much

Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2007

It's more than just being a dreamer,it is
Seeking that one place that says"this is it"

Very thought provoking!
I can really relate to it.
Enjoyed reading.

Love and Hugs,
Patricia

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2007

I guess I could be happy anywhere if my heart,spirit,soul,and mind are in the right place.
A lot to ponder here dear sweet Eileen.
Thanks for your neat comments always.
Love ya!
Ron