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Real or Imagined
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Had an unexpected opportunity to visit a monastery for a few days retreat. The poem is just a poem;-)

~*~

Surrounded by natural untouched beauty
Where wildlife abounded freely
Thoughts came unbidden questioning reality
As if controlled by a stronger power

Up at dawn on a foggy morn
She walked the penitents path
The Monastery set in sculpted landscape
On 200 acres of woodlands



Her mind wandered through the labryinth
Of mystical illusion only to find more confusion
What is real cannot always be clearly defined
While the unknown can take shape in the mind

Placing a question mark on the absolutes
As well as the hidden roots, like seeing an image in fog exagerrated out of proportion causing doubt as to its origin

We fabricate pictures in our minds from
unknown sources, so real they can become as familiar as people and things we live amongst in our daily lives,yet they are foreign,made-up
from our own imagination

Therefore it is not unwise to ask what is real
and what is imaginary, but do we always know?

etw-2007

 
 
  
 

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 Reviews of "Real or Imagined"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 2, 2007
the truth is there is not distinction between "imaginary" and "real" ... i believe what it all comes down to is, what is actual and what is fabricated ...
well written and thoughtful poem ...

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 31, 2007
No we don't always know Eileen,
that is the beauty of life.
Dreams and absolutes...what is real?
...imagine them as illusions or not.
perhaps reality is an illusion?

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 31, 2007
Fantastic work, Eileen. One of your (many!) bests I think, exhibiting your exquisite powers of analysis and thought coupled with your dextrous use of imagery and language. I personally think that objective reality is very distinct from subjective reality. Where emotions are both the fuel and the source of reality then we are all more or less bound to inhabit planets of our own, population one: me! The tree might be 30 yards from the car: objective reality. How you, I and all those beneath me on the page here see, think and feel about that will be where our differing realities lie. Therefore there are as many interpretations as there are real bodies! And do I always know what I am talking about? Objective reality says a resounding NOOOOOOOOOO!! :)) Love Kate xx

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
Your visit was certainly worthwhile Eileen if this wonderful poem was the result. I do love the philosophic element but you touch on something I find so very real. The imagination can be as creative and destructive thing and it can allow us to question the difference between what is real and what isn't. It can totally distort reality sometimes or can be alluded to so often that we come to believe what is not real. What a marvelous job you have done on this one.
Love,
Taylor

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
no, not JUST a poem-it is wonderful and full of the type of person questioning that , in the end, brings much wisdom

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
Stunning write wow and that picture brings your words to life
And the fog more intense and realistic
I love the peacefulness of your voice
And the wisdom of your words
Excellent imagery and flow
I felt calm after reading this fantastic piece
Love Peace and many Hugsss to you.....Yolie

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
Not only superb, but I've just done the same, at worth abbey, a Benedictine monastery, love it so much, I'm going back on sat for a day and weekly too. Made friends with a nun who has offered to take me... Very rich in medative and contemplation..

Have you ever read Anthony De Mello, or John Main?

I feel I relate to this that mere words don't suffice...

Reviewed on August 30, 2007
Gosh, what a perfect picture of serenity and calm! Feel better, just reading it. Thank you for the needed refreshment! As for the poem, it is perfection. We both know the Answer to life's challenges. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
Wow! Love the photograph with the fog rollin in, just magnificent! Great spiritual like story that I could relate to. True, sometimes what we imagine over time can become real, though it is not, fantastic write. Hope you had much fun and found time to relax too.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
Quite a poem and the picture makes this even more real with the fog. Conjures up all sorts of images.

George

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
And a fine poem it is! That picture is so haunting. I agree with Ed, some things can go unasked.

Dan

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
I think we often do not, and very glad to hear you had a marvelous little sojourn, Tiger Lily.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
Wonderful writing sweet lady,Please stay well and safe,Hugssssss
Love,
Chanti Lace

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
You have raised some good questions. I have just read one of your stories, "Shapeshifter" that is also filled with imaginations. Wonderful write on both!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
Quite nice Eileen.
One man's reality could be another's fantasy.
or another's worst nightmare.
guess it depends on which side of the fence you are on.

Walt

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
Something quite different from you, Eileen and I love it . . . Profound statemts abound within this self-searching poem . . . Such as "What is real cannot always be clearly defined / While the unknown can take shape in the mind."

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
Really nice words Eileen and I have to say that no we can't always tell the difference, I have often had the children now as they've grown come and ask me about things which they were sure of as kids and I believe we all question things through life. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
Nice write...it is when we lose our imagination...that reality be sometime lost...so I believe.
John

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2007
What is real and what is imaginary? Great question. Good for meditation in your reatreat and there I was imagining you were lost in some rain forest!!! maybe these headachs of mine are doing their worst. Victor

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on August 29, 2007
Great question and wonderful poem. There are so many wonders on this planet.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 29, 2007
You write with such ease that the reader is there with you.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2007
I love your just a poem writes..
Huggin and Kissin...

Reviewed on August 29, 2007
Eilleen~ I love the mystery and intrigue in the heart, felt here!
You were blessed in soothing serenity!
Wonderful heartfelt poem, I enjoyed!
Warmed in Peace,LOVE, Light and Wisdom! Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive!
STay SAFE!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2007
How exciting for you, and what an opportunity.
What we call reality is the illusion; what we call illusion, is the reality. Beautiful thoughts you've penned.

Love,
Bette


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