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Blending in the Dirt of the Ground
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It flutters as it slowly falls

in it's own unique pattern

for a moment it is suspended---

in stillness

then it continues it's way to the ground

joining all the other snowflakes

that have gone before it,

so quiet

melting into and becoming one with

the rest of the pristine snow

glistening like diamonds in the glow

of a streetlight.------------

It's like a parody of human life

With our matchless DNA

all slowly fluttering toward an end

like those who went the same way

becoming a blend

in the earthly grave

now ashes

joining with the rest of the dirt

in the ground

that the sun beats down upon.

{only our bodies;}

 E T
 
 

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 Reviews of "Blending in the Dirt of the Ground"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on December 31, 2007
well done enjoyed the read, love pic

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 19, 2007
Yes Kate said it best....great offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
I agree with Kate. I love the analogy with the snow. Liz

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
Very delicate and fragile moods, emotions and thoughts here, Eileen. And I love the analogy with the snow; it's just right. Of course, we all know that the colours of spring follow on from the translucence of becoming light and air once committed to the ground. But I like this winter of the soul. And the wonder of it. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
It's like a parody of human life

Fascinating, and like human life, that snow disappears into the ground very quickly.

Reviewed on December 18, 2007
Beautiful and cleverly penned poem. GBQ

Reviewed on December 18, 2007
Very well penned, Eileen; always a joy to read you! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Merry Christmas to you and yours!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
Eileen, this is absolutely brilliant and you have captured the moment so well.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
A blanket of velvet verse, very nice.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
Beautifully expressed...blanketed metaphors covered with pristine softness...that of harmony and peace...Happy Holidays Eileen...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
hopefully, my ashes will be allowed to blend into the sea of life, to be reborn upon the earth of a distant world ...

excellent poem ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
beautifully written-the picture makes me want to be there

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
You did a grand job on this one my dear, love Holly

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
Very thought provoking, ET, as usual you always make me think..Superb!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
The metaphor on life and death so well presented in a seasonal setting.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
This gives me so much to think about,, timing is everything,,, thanks for this Eileen,,it is quite inspirational.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
becoming a blend in the earthly grave...everything does pass away, i watched the snow fall today, then melt, then fall again...its a beautiful metaphor ET

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
"Sugar chum?" Gotta love it . . . Absolutely, the nature of humans are no different than the nature of anything else, well, except maybe Hillary . . . We all move toward the earth from whence we can at our own pace and style . . .

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
Love this combination and thoughts of life.
Snow makes everywhere look beautiful just for that short span...

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
We all get back to where we came from... dirt. Guess even a grave is prettier with a layer of new snow. Provoking write, Eileen. Enjoyed!
Becca~

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
The seasonal spirit has gifted you with a special profundity sugar chum. No spacial lamenting here, just lovely warm visual insights that soothe the soul and warm the heart.
Blessings and Love ...
Richard

Reviewed on December 17, 2007
All is one in the End, and the beginning, wonderful metaphor Eileen.
Blessings! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
a beautiful tribute to our own lives. life is intertwined with all of nature and we become one with each breath.

always,
randy

Reviewed on December 17, 2007
A stunning image and thought provoking write, Eileen, well done. The top layer reflects the glory, the others get mashed. LOL Ow. LOL Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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