...well written words of birds and dreams...the doves to day...and to night the dreams...crows nest of darkness...again wishes for sun.
I very much like your poetry here Eileen...
John
I love to hear the birds early in the morning.
But I don't like hearing crows at my door.
Where there is one, there is always more.
I think I got your metaphor!!
Doug
ET, wonder anytime if Noah of the Ark carried a umbrella? forty days and forty nights of rain kind of shot to pieces any other perspective he could had entertain! ! !
And, if instead of a dove carrying that laurel twig it was one of your crows? what then today?
Just asking...
The light of day contrasted by the darkness of night, each offering its own sense of how we perceive life's movement. I can't help but feel both hope and despair. I am glad I sleep at night and don't have to think so much about my mortality.
Forever more, forever more, says the Raven, you are leaning very close to Edgar Allen shoulders here in the very impressive last line, great ending. Hugs and Blessings! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
this day in a life...is a life measured in a day...Great read
I love the coo of doves... one of my favorite sounds in all the world! The last two places we lived we had mourning doves who nested in our back yard...we are hoping that we will have them at our new house as well...just trying to get that home built!
Cryssa
From the author of Jupiter Remembered and Until It’s Time: Embracing Life In Our Later Years comes Petals of Love: Poetry of a Woman’s Soul – a heartfelt collection spanning more than thirty-five years. Through tender reflections, these poems offer g
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I very much like your poetry here Eileen...
John
Love Tinka
Lovely write!
Becca~
But I don't like hearing crows at my door.
Where there is one, there is always more.
I think I got your metaphor!!
Doug
And, if instead of a dove carrying that laurel twig it was one of your crows? what then today?
Just asking...
Georg
God bless you. Kathy
Sheila
Love, Micke
Excellent write my friend. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Cryssa