I see you in the Moon at night
and in the Suns morning light
at times I see you in the stars
and other cosmic nebulars
In seeing you so very much
I'm fervid to feel your touch
and though it hasn't happened yet
I'm so glad that we have met
I have you in the falling rain
that comes to kiss away my pain
and the flakes of pure white snow
that tell me you know that I know
on the shore through oceans breeze
to me you whisper, words that seize
on your wave of desire, I'm set afire
with the ebb and flow of the tidal tow
you thrust your cosmic blade of light
into my void and I take flight for
I must be where e'er you are
even if on some distant star.
touching and very easy to comprehend Eileen, thanks for not getting Armadillo, it was actually a mean poem, not all about me but about what some of my poetic friends are going through being thin skinned in this crazy den, I feel you would get it more if you were going through or had been through what they have experienced, in and off this den, Holly Harbridge is one who has been bashed and harassed, she's left and returned several times because of certan devils on the den and off. As far as I'm concerned yes, I've been attacked several times here lately by one I thought was my friend, a pure jeaous attack, had nothing hardly to do with a good or bad review, so now you got it, if not you'll hate( Poetic don't get), hugs
He can come in many forms, and as the words said, present in everything that make and complete your existence.
More a prayer of thanks than a poem, exquisite.
Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
WHISPERS OF THE HEART is artist and author J. Allen Wilson's second book of poetry.It can be autographed and shipped within 48 hours of order. NO LONGER AVAILABLE.
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with the ebb and flow of the tidal tow"
Internal rhyme is so difficult to pull off well but you've aced it with this.
Always enjoy your wonderful poetry
Love & Peace be with you
William
take care,
William
Your writings are as sharp and well-executed as ever . . . superb!!
Best wishes,
Lance
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Sheila
More a prayer of thanks than a poem, exquisite.
Georg
...I'm set afire / with the ebb and flow of the tidal flow...
-gene.
Sandie Angel :o)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Be always safe,
Karen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;D