in transition (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 18, 2008

Self delusion can be something nice.
Lovely write. Very deep!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed on November 17, 2008

Eileen,

Your pens are simply magnificent!!

Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed on November 17, 2008

I grasped for reality, but alas, the apparitions were in my way -- this is a very special poem -- asking, proposing, searching -- peace and love to you my friend -- JMW

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on November 17, 2008

"is this self delusion, or is it really an
apparition obstructing my way"

Is there a real difference? Still something to be dealt with, on any level.

Walt

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 17, 2008

Thought provoking excellence, Eileen, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 17, 2008

Once again, only the writer knows for sure.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 17, 2008

"...daunted by arcane images..." ET, welcome to my world!

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on November 17, 2008

Eileen, you have expressed yourself so well in this.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

your work is always inspiring

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

Confusion weighs on one, faith and time will lift the fog..excellent poem to ponder.
Love,Christine

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

eerie pondering in this deep poem.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

excellent poem exposing betrayal and confusion while in moments of weakness ... transformation is certainly not easy or free of pitfalls ...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

I hope you will get out of the maze soon. Keep walking...

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

You will my friend, trust your gut and not the eyes and you will find your way. GREAT write, Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

i think this says alot about how we often feel in life--well expressed!

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

Just keep on marching Eileen and you'll get there. There's always a way out of any maze.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

A paradox?
Recognition. . . . .
Yet staying in transition. . . . .
A crossroad?
Destination. . . . . .
Or fustration. . . .because of hesitation.
I felt uncertainity in this poem.
Doug

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

I will be praying for you, and so will my church family. You are covered in prayer, Eileen; continue to trust in Jesus, and He'll get you through! He did me; He'll do the same for you! God bless you, (((Dear Heart)))!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D X0X0X0

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

Praying that the maze will lighten and the puzzles of the twists and turns become rational and you will be on course again . . . I've missed everyone, just haven't been around much lately . . .