clever arrangement -- clever shift in meaning to the reader -- a teaser for those that like to be treated -- loved it Eileen-- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael

So very nice, Eileen, beautiful pen.

LOVELY!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Most interesting, and very good, Tiger Lily!

i like this! very cheery!

Enjoyed Eileen I liked the way you wrote "For Kate"
I will also check the latest news about George,
thank you for keeping us abreast.

Blessings and take the best of care,
Gwendolyn

excellent offering, Eileen ...

I like the first one the best. I liked it when Kate did it and I like yours. Liz

Eileen I love your talent and how you use it. Awesome!

With Love,
Cindy

THANK YOU, Eileen! I'm chuffed. I'm pretty rubbish at poetry challenges and exercises, but if my Poetry-Machines effort inspired you to play with lines, words and meanings in this beautiful way, then I'm delighted - AND with the personalisation, too! :)) The rain may stay obediently on the plain in Spain, but not so on the London High Street; I most certainly will be chasing me own bustle, let alone busses now that I am once again split between two houses! I blame it all on that intoxicating Levante wind myself, the little monkey.... Harbinger of "living dreams" he is especially powerful on the southernmost tip of Europe where the fusion of cultures is at its strongest. London will surely be another melting pot... Jane Austen meets Carmen... Interesting!! :)) LOVE THIS, bless you, Koelho Kate xx

She'll love this, what about the bulls? Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Great offering Eileen!!

Love Tinka

Great verse Eileen
With love,
Ron

Eileen,

Beautifully imaged verse - you inspire us to reach our dreams! Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

same words, but such different meanings... Love it...just like Kate's...
Cryssa :~)

Cute write; well done, Eileen!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D