Unusual Words (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on June 9, 2009

Well...I must say that you did much better than I could have dreamed of doing... Kudos!
Cryssa

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 7, 2009

fine reply to this challenge ...

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

You're always up for a challenge. . . . .
And in 15 minutes!!
You're the best.
Doug

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

you did a great job Eileen, makes perfect sense to me, yum yummy the cuisine goes down my tummy, hugs

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

Wonderful poem, I bow to greatness
I Enjoyed
Have a great day
Ray { Not a Poet }

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

Beautifully done, Eileen. I have a problem
trying to rhyme moon and spoon. -gene.

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

Hi Eileen, very creative indeed, and it actually made sense to this brain... I like the last line... ;]

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

Now Thats Kool and creative
Enjoyed much
Love & Peace

William

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

... Lewis Carroll would understand this perfectly, Eileen, as would Jim Morrison and The Doors; the Fall and Rise of Alice as she negotiates the Mad Hatter's Teaparty, and the Caterpillar's magic mushroom come to mind! 15 mins is enough for a whole Wonderland to evolve, after all! :)) This is an anodyne outpouring and most certainly not asinine! xx

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

Unusual and well done. Lady J

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

A most enjoyable read, Eileen...

Carole~

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

Very good, Eileen, I enjoyed this a lot.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

The painting would be totally rad! ...glistening shades of Aquamarine...
with a shimmering shadow in sateen...yet, showing the face of contemplation... with a tad of gloom for desire...for addictions...it broods over its weaknesses, with only some parts wanting to overcome them...Yeah,
"...the making of a promise", so, the eyes are closed,
but that smile... that smile, that initiates from the coils of a snake, that twists the soul, and goes back for more...opened jaw to strike, injecting the venom to swallow another meal

...speaking French no less! :)
Outstanding job Eileen!
I love "Unusual Words" in more words than one!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

Wow, you suddenly make me look dumb as a bag of rocks! LOL Too clever, Eileen; you've met said challenge brilliantly! Very well written; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :/ *D'oh!* LOLOLOL

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

Well, now, Eileen, think you've met and exceeded said challenge! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

..and I had fun reading this,,smiles!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

Well....sounds wonderful to me sweet lady..well done indeed..stay safe and well...Hugsss

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

Sis, you, Jersey Ed and Mescaline? what a trip! ! ! ! ! !
Ma ain't be proud of ya, but your other brothers are.

EDvard Ole Brother

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

very clever!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

LOVELY!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

Wow! Skipping over dreams on mescaline,
Slidin like a snake to eat haute cuisine!

Hope you had a good time. It seems both my brothers and my sister are trippin today!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

Ya done did good ET. ;-)

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

very fun...especially those mescaline dreams :)

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

Eileen,
A delightful little romp, but go easy on that mescaline!
John

Reviewed by Richard Hiebner

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

Thoroughly enjoyable

Thank you for this brief little indulgence

It cheers the mood

Richard