Fractured Feelings (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on June 27, 2009

I had to smile as I read this poem as I recently wrote a poem using some of these exact words...I will have to post it sometime soon...

:~)
Cryssa
The picture is gorgeous

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

Reviewed on June 26, 2009

Wonderful write, enjoyed
The Buzzard

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on June 24, 2009

An absolute stunning piece of poetry, Eileen...a keeper for sure!

Carole~

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on June 23, 2009

I have no fancy words to describe your talent. Patrick

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on June 23, 2009

Stunning and unique write my friend, enjoyed this much!
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 23, 2009

BRILLIANT, Eileen... such an apt analogy and metaphor: I could really feel this, the bubbles in the chipped glass gone dead flat. Fabulous stream of consciousness here. It's hard to say, but think this is one of your best, in my opinion. Great capture and well sustained. xx

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on June 23, 2009

Great pen, Eileen, so very good...
you've captured 'Fractured Feelings'
Superb imagery as par the course for you. ;)

Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2009

Impressed by the choice of words.

Reviewed by Chris Reed (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2009

i really enjoyed this. The imagery is breathtaking.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 23, 2009

wonderful imagery and word use!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on June 23, 2009

...'Wounded nights of waiting in crystal caves of lost love shaved by blades of lies...'---------EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 23, 2009

Quite a captivating poem and graphic, Tiger Lily.

PS Although Brother Edvard is praising you below, he just slammed you in his latest poem - For Shame! (You're still my favorite sister!)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 23, 2009

Sometimes we go around reading, commenting, reviewing, like greeting a know face, a voice heard before, a hand writing on our wall, and then...you come across with a delicate pearl of a poem to surprise us with such a delight.
Thanks

Georg

Reviewed by Robert Jude(Ace) Forese

Reviewed on June 22, 2009

sensually colorful ... flows effortlessly ...

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on June 22, 2009

I was floating with these lines, absolutely stunning. Be Well, Carin

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 22, 2009

Beautiful, Eileen.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 22, 2009

Rufuz wanted to keep going west to see his Auntie Eileen, but financial problems would not permit it...anyway I wanted to get back to the relative coolness of Jersey...but someday...ed

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 22, 2009

..a story colored with such exquisite taste, I agree with George, this is masterfully written..blows me away.
Love,
Christine

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on June 22, 2009

Powerful poem, Eileen. Hopefully this is a sensitive soul's observation of other's collective pain and not yours. Just realized--this is a jazz poem! Begs to be read aloud. Stunning imagery!!

Lin

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on June 22, 2009

Eileen,
Beautiful writing sustained my bright, delicate, relevant imagery, but the last three lines suggest another mood and tone, a darkness in the heart, shades of disappointment. Fine poem.
John

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 22, 2009

Stunning work, Eileen: what more can I say?? Excellent; brava!

(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~

As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 22, 2009

Your work is always beautiful.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 22, 2009

Don't know of any one who can master the descriptive lingo that you portray in a poem that should be posted where it can get critical acclaim and shine on the poetic brilliance of our master poet Eileen outside of all of us who know her brilliance already here in our little den. Bravo Eileen for yet another poetic gem for the ages. A keeper for sure.
Many hugs,
George