What's Hidden in Transitions (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 20, 2009

perception, the defining difference that separates human beings as individuals -- and so it is that we each perceive those transitory experiences far differently -- searching for the relevance -- hoping for the opportunity to share -- seeking spiritual solace and the hand of divine providence to grant us peace -- "what's hidden in transitions"? -- a philosophical question, a religious question -- a rendering from a gifted poet, a wonderful, spiritual lady -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on August 28, 2009

Been there with the same experiences...but could never explain as poetly as you have done here, Eileen! Absolutely beautiful reality you express. To my library, for sure...
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

Me too! You have perfectly captured those moments...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

You have captured those exquisite moments of transition that I find so peaceful where my thoughts can float between...

Carole~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

...or when chrysalis becomes a butterfly.
You have written exquisite words for transitions.

Georg

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

I welcome those times of thought. I enjoy the quiet. Great poem, Eileen. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

sometimes, transitional periods do give a bit of peace-i like this

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

Wow! Such Depth in Transformation felt here ET!
Haven't read you in awhile, think I may stay....

WRITE ON!
Blessings and Peace, Warrior Purple_Passions, SHEExooo

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

inspired thoughts, exceptional metaphors ...

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

Wonderful poetic depth. I think I'll just go and meditate on this one for a while.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

Eileen,
Those places in between so well realised and accepted for what they are, the changes in perception and feeling we'd be lost without; once we cope with them we maintain our humanity and our sanity.

John

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

a mystery indeed. well wrote here. LadyJ

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

Dying to see the other side, leave someone in charge will ya, like someone familiar with these things, or put a string on the bedpost so you don't fly into never never land. You as I see from this poem, must have slipped away somewhere already, glad you're back.
Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

... don't you go disappearing down any cracks between anytime soon, Eileen! :)) Yet you have captured that wonderful je-ne-sais-quoi, the interstices of conscious state, in these wonderfully rhyming couplets that flow seamlessly and without effort, like water through dry sand. You explain so well those epiphanic instants we know exist interleaved between time and space while yet begging the questions. Excellent stuff here! :)) xx

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

...such transformation from thoughts to dreams..from dreams to thoughts...great write!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

Very nice write, Eileen; you mesmerize me with your awesome gift! Keep on writing, (((girlfriend))), and I'll keep a readin'! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~

As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

Eileen, you have captured in your highly disciplined couplets
that interval between yesterday and today when the mind opens
to possibilities that wait beyond the mysteries of tomorrow.
-gene.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

That is the best time of the morning for sure. It seems to be the time I get most of my ideas. Beautifully composed. Patrick

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

Ah, you and about a hundred zillion other people, Eileen. I love the way you used the couplet to get your message across and the in-depth reach you obtained with it.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

You write at a time of much inspiration, that short period of time before the sun rises for a new day. It is the element of cosmic illuminations...Nicely done ET
peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

I'm crawling right behind you too.
I'm just a trace
A thorn in place.

Doug

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

This is so beautiful Eileen. Your gift is wonderful!!

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

oh my gosh...I love this!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!! I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva