The brilliance of your
mind flows over me like
the finest wine - your
effervesecent thought,
though sometimes insane,
is like champagne, in my brain
i'm saturated by the
syllables that flow off
your tongue- with the utmost
of fluidity they are beautifully
sung-you have me surrounded
on an intoxicating isle of
imagery-amongst a mirage of
magical metaphors, that make
me, most passionately. yours...
Well, well, well, Eileen, you've obviously been artfully seduced.
Care to share your seducer's name? With results like this, I'm most eager to sign up for tutoring. I may be an old dog, but there's nothing I'd like better than to turn... uh, learn a new trick.
Intoxicated on an isle of imagery with champagne thoughts effervescing through the brain, being bathed in a fluidity of syllables sounds like a poets' paradise, Eileen! :)) No wonder passions are running high here! A beautiful love-letter that is faithfully, truly... his! (hers? ours?!) As smooth and as flowing as the vintage you speak of. Nicely done. xx
What a swell tribute to someone who influences you chum.
I had to chuckle at the juxtapose between imparting life and recognising, also, the bouts with occasional mental derangement. Nailing the human element quite effectively.
Blessings ...
Ahhh...Love, Passion, Romance...you write of all so very well, Eileen!How many lovers will be hoping "Is this for Me?" Keep 'em guessing! :o)
Blessings and Love - Micke
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Care to share your seducer's name? With results like this, I'm most eager to sign up for tutoring. I may be an old dog, but there's nothing I'd like better than to turn... uh, learn a new trick.
Lyrically romantic.
Richard
Ron
I had to chuckle at the juxtapose between imparting life and recognising, also, the bouts with occasional mental derangement. Nailing the human element quite effectively.
Blessings ...
Cryssa
soft like a whisper...
enjoyed...
Art Sun...
Such passion in this writing...and who is the lucky person of such admiration? Splendid ode.
John
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
to the brilliance of your mind and passion
of your pen. -gene.
Blessings and Love - Micke
With Love,
Cindy
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Continuing prayers coming y'all's way~
effervesecent thought,
though sometimes insane,
is like champagne, in my brain
Wow - sounds like quite a high.
Georg