Mighty Men Destined for Hell (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 4, 2009

There is alway hope in the purity of the infant next generation. Patrick

Reviewed on October 4, 2009

A splendid offering...one of your best Eileen, you give us much to ponder on in this gripping piece. Well written.

Carole~

Reviewed by Linda Zebsokey

Reviewed on October 3, 2009

Let there be "peach on earth, good will towards man(kind)." We must never forget the promise. Well done Eileen.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

Eileen,
Love everything about this, even the shape of the poem on paper... it's sharp, thrusting, rhythmic, provocative and right on the money!

John

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

good and thought provoking write!we certainly need someone to rescue this planet-perhaps we should keep looking in to find the answers!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

a gripping, powerfully detailed dispatch, discoursing the conditions of the world's misgivings ... great rhyme ...

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

ooo...ranting alliteration...feel better?

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

people engage in games of deception to serve their lust for power -- never realizing there is only one power, and all other power is fantasy and false -- the power of God and his love are the only real powers in the universe -- you have worded this powerfully Eileen -- it hits with great realism and conviction my dear friend -- peace and love --Jon Michael

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

But, but, but, Eileen, I thought we have the savior in carnate / Change is coming, you give up too easily / He has a plan / For everything . . .

Sorry. Had to mini-rant / Love this poem and the way you set it up / The two- and three-word stanzas with heavy-duty meaning is just a delight to read. Stand / Clap-Clap / Bow

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

An exceptional flow of thought esteemed chum.
And I feel as if you are wielding a sharpened two-edged sword
in a way that i have rarely seen you do. I see, too, a metaphor
in Judas' kiss, being what pagan culture has,
and is, doing to their very own Creator.
What a day His glorious advent will be.
Blessings ...

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

Write On! Powerful pen, Eileen, Bravo!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

I THINK THIS IS ONE OF YOUR VERY BEST, EILEEN... the title had me fooled, there being so many Halloween offerings around atdemo! :)) But this packs a punch with wit, charm and efficacy - and the tight form and writing is brill. Totally fabulous not-so-parable-ic! Particularly love these lines:

daunted derelicts
kings and clerics
ministers and laic
of cast-off crowns
ever renowned
pontiffs , peasants
peacocks, pheasants
defrocked, dispelled
headed towards hell

... these trip along so gaily and yet the message is so dark! Excellent stuff! xx

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

So simple, God's plan to keep them from going to hell, and yet, man ignores God, chooses his own path. Powerfully penned, Eileen, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

Among the weeds you are a precious flower, with a beautiful buguette of poetry wrapped, in a parchment of spirituel delight.
Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

Headed Towards Hell - it seems the entire world is heading that way, today.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

As always ..wonderful writing sweet lady..stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

Very well written Eillen. Thank you.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

And the angels are shoveling coal...!

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

Excellent write, Eileen; powerfully penned! Well done yet again; brava!~

(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~

As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 2, 2009

Clear, direct and well said, Eileen.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on October 1, 2009

With new life comes hope. A strong voice rings throughout this poem. Each ling brings a new image. Well done!
Sheila

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 1, 2009

Strongly worded but with a clear message.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on October 1, 2009

This covers quite a bit of ground
Broad and wide is the road that leads to destruction.
Narrow and straight that leads to the gate

Doug