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Hidden Wars That We Accept
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He was only twenty one
When he died holding a gun
To defend himself in war
Not the kind you keep score

This war was about drugs
Of crafty sellers, lousy thugs
Who had taken his baby sister
Making her a whore and user

She was just shy of sweet sixteen
Prettiest thing you've ever seen
She fell for a guy who was hooked
Many times having been booked


A lad of twenty almost brain dead
Preyed on young girls keep habit fed
Using drugs and alcohol since age ten
He had lost himself to the users yen

Now the first time he shot a man up close
Brother to the girl who died of overdose
He could barely remember who she was
Slinking off into the night to find a buzz

He left behind a dead sister and brother
In this war that is worse than any other
We pray for our military, heroes they are
We worry and pray that we get out of war
How often do we pray about drug use
Why doesn't Hollywood protest this abuse?

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note:This lifestyle has become taken for
granted. It is so much a part of our culture
I think it will be what destroys us not terrorism,
because it makes our young men and wome
weak and careless

etw

 

 


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 Reviews of "Hidden Wars That We Accept"
Reviewed by Victoria Lane (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2010
Indeed.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 14, 2010
A sad, but well-written, commentary on our times. Much is hidden in plain sight.

Ron

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on February 14, 2010
Well said, Eileen!
Sheila

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on February 13, 2010
Hollywood propagates such action and glorifies the most vile creation that man has ever made. The Gun!

This penn brings to mind a book I read called - The Cross and the Switchblade.

Hard hitting write Tiggs, in the year of the TIGGER.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on February 13, 2010
ET, Quite an explicit poem, but well written and well meant. I cannot condone nor begin to understand the loose thinking when it comes to drugs and illegal activity..Society does turn the other way, not wanting to deal with it all...Can you imagine how crowded our jails would be if all these drug dealers and pimps were finally put away?
Our government cannot sustain this. so they remain complacent. So much to go on about this subject matter we all could write volumes.
I just want to say something positive, there are quite a few young people that do not partake or sell drugs. I am happy to know that my three grown children are in that portion of our society..I work at a college (an ivy league one at that) and yes there is a section of students who do recreational drugs, but there are more that do not...Drinking on the other hand is a different story. (another drug of choice..)

I guess when you write a poem that causes so many people to react and review you have done a good thing...

I wish you much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on February 13, 2010
It will always be a problem as long as our government sanctions it!!


GOD BLESS
Tony

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 13, 2010
Eileen, this is so tragic, and I have to say that I agree with you 100%!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 13, 2010
It's not really hidden, it's become part of our society, and as Brother Georg says, we seem to accept so many things today that we would have been outraged about in the past. Truly a sad state of affairs, today.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 13, 2010
Endemic is the word that here applies. Our society has accepted war, pedophilia, politicians draft, Wall Street greed, bankers loan sharking, moral corruption, rape, gangs...why should drugs be different to a society that has abandoned the Ten Commandments?
Caught between extreme religious right and the total lack of it the blind mice are running around the hungry cat.

Georg


Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on February 13, 2010
this is a hard hitting piece Eileen -- your assessment of Hollywood's lack of an outcry is of course because of their rampant abuse of booze and illicit drugs -- this is a war of many facets, with roots in far away places and local faces -- it is a war of cultural and moral decay -- a war entrenched with the loss of the family unit as central to the culture of America -- the realization of the loss of humanity,through not only violence, but the loss of what have been the most gifted and talented among us, to drug destroyed intellects -- it saddens anyone who stops to consider the absolute tragedy of it all -- peace and love to you my dear friend -- JM

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on February 12, 2010
Shamefully it's very common on the evening news here in LA. Try Tijuana it's a true epidemic. Hollywood ranks amongst the best customers..no protest there. Patrick

Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on February 12, 2010
A so very sad story, that HAS become a part of the norm. This is the war, that I will go to the front lines for, I am only one, but if I can help just one, then maybe the motion of Paying it Forward will come into play. Thank you for writing this, The more we bring it to light, hopefully more will join the ranks.

Warmth and Love to you, Eileen. Carin' Spirit

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 12, 2010
the futilities of war are endless, no matter on the battlefields of foreign countries or on the meth-mountains of california ...

raw and well written, Eileen ...

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on February 12, 2010
Hollywood did a fabulous take on this current problem of crystal meth in "Traffic" - Catherine Zeta Jones/Michael Douglas in 2000. You've tackled a tuff one here ET.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 12, 2010
thank you for this--and this war, these battles are so necessary to win in order to save our society from such horrendous terrors

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 12, 2010
Well said, Eileen, well said! I hear you, I hear you.

John

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on February 12, 2010
Amen, Eileen. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 12, 2010
You are so, so right, Eileen. Thanks for sharing this; well done indeed. God bless.

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on February 12, 2010
Look to your neighbor--chances are they are users. It's everywhere, including the "best" neighborhoods. As Stepponwolf declared, "...***damn the pusher". But don't forget the physicians who throw a prescription at every ailment instead of treating the source and getting kickbacks from the drug companies. Powerful write, E.!!

Lin

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on February 12, 2010
Very well written and with much wisdom Eileen. Thank you.
With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 12, 2010
Sad, harsh, and real; this is a most apt and timely write, Eileen. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2010
You have said what I have said a time or two, Eileen / We not only seem to condone it we allow our star athletes to get away with murder and are championed with the press. Except when someone harms animals, then they go to the joint. There is an alibi for killing people, but oh, do not tread on our sacred cows, i.e., animal rights. I love animals and hate it when people mistreat them. But I love my fellow man also, but it seems the powers that be and the press just think it is another day in the hood. Why? Because if anything is said out of line with the Reverend Jackson, et al, about it they are condemned as racists. And yes, I am talking about black on black crime which is committed hundreds of time daily across this once great land.


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