He was only twenty one
When he died holding a gun
To defend himself in war
Not the kind you keep score
This war was about drugs
Of crafty sellers, lousy thugs
Who had taken his baby sister
Making her a whore and user
She was just shy of sweet sixteen
Prettiest thing you've ever seen
She fell for a guy who was hooked
Many times having been booked
A lad of twenty almost brain dead
Preyed on young girls keep habit fed
Using drugs and alcohol since age ten
He had lost himself to the users yen
Now the first time he shot a man up close
Brother to the girl who died of overdose
He could barely remember who she was
Slinking off into the night to find a buzz
He left behind a dead sister and brother
In this war that is worse than any other
We pray for our military, heroes they are
We worry and pray that we get out of war
How often do we pray about drug use
Why doesn't Hollywood protest this abuse?
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note:This lifestyle has become taken for
granted. It is so much a part of our culture
I think it will be what destroys us not terrorism,
because it makes our young men and wome
weak and careless
etw
Ron
Sheila
This penn brings to mind a book I read called - The Cross and the Switchblade.
Hard hitting write Tiggs, in the year of the TIGGER.
Our government cannot sustain this. so they remain complacent. So much to go on about this subject matter we all could write volumes.
I just want to say something positive, there are quite a few young people that do not partake or sell drugs. I am happy to know that my three grown children are in that portion of our society..I work at a college (an ivy league one at that) and yes there is a section of students who do recreational drugs, but there are more that do not...Drinking on the other hand is a different story. (another drug of choice..)
I guess when you write a poem that causes so many people to react and review you have done a good thing...
I wish you much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
GOD BLESS
Tony
Caught between extreme religious right and the total lack of it the blind mice are running around the hungry cat.
Georg
Warmth and Love to you, Eileen. Carin' Spirit
raw and well written, Eileen ...
John
Lin
With Love,
Cindy
Regis