This brings to mind regrets that keep us up at night. A kind of depression that results from actions taken with the best of intentions that turned out wrong. A deep and meaningful write that gets to the emotions from the heart.
You conjure both mood and confusion well, Eileen, with the sonorous heaviness of your words to reflect that sorry, contrite heart. Hopefully with thoughts and actions that express regret, dark clouds will have been dispelled and limbo alleviated. May any such fated fiasco be transformed into sweetly refreshed friendship. Whatever the day brings, you pen it well. xx
Eileen, a love overwhelmed with events irreconcilable can result in the worst, disillusionment. With a heart thus wounded and love itself, impugned. We often know not where to turn to seek answers and resolution. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael
Bleakness of disappointment courses through
the veins of this, Eileen, and the only rescue
seems to be in the title you've chosen; it's hard
to move on after 'fated fiasco' but we must try.
"fated fiasco" A lot of those it seems in life. Sometimes that special love we hope for never seems to materialize. Along the way types and shadows appear and disappear, and at times someone will touch us in a special way and encourage us to hope for more. Alas, how many have lamented, in a morning love song, all that remains unanswered. Bittersweet sentiments chum.
Peace and love to you ... richard
Eileen, none can surpass the gifted poetry you write every time your pen is put to paper another gem is created. I added a new word to my vocabulary (Aubade) Thank you.
Many events in life are beyond our control and that's when we let God and let go.
Georgexx
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 21, 2011
I admit, my friend, that you have completely stunned me with this one. Have no idea what it is supposed to be. Maybe it is just me and those who come after me will not have that problem.
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Hugs
from
Kay
Ron
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
the veins of this, Eileen, and the only rescue
seems to be in the title you've chosen; it's hard
to move on after 'fated fiasco' but we must try.
John
Peace and love to you ... richard
and this piece I found to be an enjoyable read
of an excellent poem
Love & Peace be with you
William
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony
I know this feeling!
Blessings,
Christine
Many events in life are beyond our control and that's when we let God and let go.
Georgexx