I have enjoyed many of your poems.It seems this one is less painful. But beautifu.However, I think it is suffering which produces much more meaningful art. Thanks
Hira
Life goes on, regardless of what we do -- Dream, meditate, take action or simply ponder that "whats" of life. The nagging question is When will all this ugliness end?
What a great poem, Axilea. Phrases so beautiful you have to read them three times in a row: "blinded by dust and lies"; ...her gray hair, her ashes are clouds in my eyes."--all so beautiful. A passive dream that leads to positive action is always the most blessed kind of dream. Hope you find yourself dancing with the motion that's spurred by this emotion--that you bathe in the ocean of possibilities. Hope the clouds in your eyes rain down the right words, and nourish the ground you walk on, and spring up flowers with scents more exotic than you have heretofore known. --Charlie
Sometimes as this write suggests we need to just be passive, sit back, think things throught and then act when the time is right. To rush in blindly to the fight is for fools and presidents. Lots of room in your write for readers thoughts to co mingle which is always nice. Keep up the word...
Very perplexing question if we chose to let it be. There is a time and a season for everything and yet not enough time or reason. Blessings Always, Paul.
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I have enjoyed many of your poems.It seems this one is less painful. But beautifu.However, I think it is suffering which produces much more meaningful art. Thanks
Hira
Well done.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
God bless you. Kathy
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Fee
Very perplexing question if we chose to let it be. There is a time and a season for everything and yet not enough time or reason. Blessings Always, Paul.
I salute You Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU