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Sea Landing
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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 I never liked blue

Except in the sky

And until I blended a drop of red

I questioned my colors

Because of their blindness

And thought I’d lose balance

… fall…

Instead, I opened

Yet another window, yet another

And I took off

(so surprised to see I could fly)

 

I visited, you see?

Ice cold Neptune

Hottest Venus

It seemed like an endless ride

Riding the tide

Of real feelings

More real than ever - ultimate

My propulsion subsystem

The simple pleasure

Cascading

 

Fuelled

My spacecraft led me

To a discovery

 

Home

 

Was a place inside

 

I knew it all the way

                                  - But what we know

                                  We can hide

                                    Like a sin -

Until I touched down

And saw the land of security

Felt it inside

Where it should be.

 

A perfect sea landing

 

No more anguish

On the shore.

 


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 Reviews of "Sea Landing"
Reviewed on July 22, 2008
Love the landing!
Your heart is pure!
propulsion subsystem - Wow
The thoughts make me tingle!
Love this heartfelt write and written in purple (rich and sensual)
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo

Stay Positive!

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 30, 2008
A journey of discovery...self discovery... finding peace and the place to call home within our hearts.

This is exquisitely done...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2008
Such a wonderful ride of new colors, new realizations, new birth as we learn to weather the storms and let peace reside. Each word you penned is a journey in itself. Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on May 26, 2008
Get a load of all of these comments! I've missed AD. I love what manny moreno had to say-- love it... boy did that ever sink deep into my dry soil with its watery wisdom! And too, I thoroughly agree with David Hightower. I alway associate red with blood... purple with it too... the two chambers of the heart melding-- one full of oxygen, the other, yearning to gulp it... the two, melding to purple, that's the whole being (did I write this before?) Anyways, that's why I love purple... superficially, it's seen as being a fun, silly color, but below the surface, there is a depth deeper than... well, it's poetic...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 26, 2008
Lovely and meaningful verses; thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 26, 2008
I love the imagery and discovery in this gem! Thank you for sharing!...ET

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on May 25, 2008
Beautifully written piece about finding your inner self.

Reviewed on May 25, 2008
great poetic get together, it does feel good to finally figure the world out for self :)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 25, 2008
Quite a voyage of inner discovery you took us on here Axil and the finish as you always manage to do so wonderfully was well worth the long trip.
Fee

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 25, 2008
Axilea,
I truly enjoyed this magnificient write
Love & Peace
Be with you

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 25, 2008
Quite a journey to search for what you had inside. Brilliant. Liz

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on May 25, 2008
Wonderful story of a trip taken to planets in this universe. And to come back to a perfect sea landing is quite a feat. It renews you in spirit, mind and body. Good write.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on May 25, 2008
Very profound and beautifully written.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on May 25, 2008
The depth of this poem is equal to the depth of your soul. Lovely work, I really loved this line:

"Until I touched down
And saw the land of security
Felt it inside
Where it should be."

You are such a gifted poetess!

Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2008
Beautiful.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on May 25, 2008
ahhh, the soul's unending journey...
nicely penned, axilea.much enjoyed.
peace & blessings,
carolyn

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on May 25, 2008
you arrived back safe and sound in a round about,approach landing all clear for next take off....nicely done,
stan

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on May 25, 2008
Riding this tide~of the raw subsystem .~. evol Ted

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 25, 2008
Very nice, beautiful poem!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed on May 25, 2008
I really loved this poem, Axilea; it drew me in and didn't let go! Magical! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 25, 2008
-But what we know
We can hide
Like a sin-
is for me the essence of it
and adds to the certainty of the expresssion and the theme.
Such a sure touch here
John

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on May 24, 2008
Really nice work Axilea...one can see you have delved into the very essence of your soul...there is where we find our landing, our safe haven....

Our true selves...

Nice, truly nice...

Art...

Reviewed on May 24, 2008
Absolutely stunning, Axilea, your best - BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on May 24, 2008
Axilea - Loved the imagery you used to express your spiritual journey. I keep thinking of the red as blood and life. - David

Reviewed by manny moreno
Reviewed on May 24, 2008
I was told years ago by an elder, a medicine man, that I should begin to gather my "medicine". I answered of course naively, " You mean roots and eagle feathers "? he scolded back "NO!" The medicine within you!.

Well years later I learned to understand. You see , the medicine to make me well was within me, I had to "gather it" to find my way and be a better , happy human being, no matter how dark the weather of life became, the medicine within me, would take care of me, make me secure......you Axilea, time to gather your medicine..A`Ho! My lovely angel friend. Be well Axilea. I love you.

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2008
lovely poetry


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