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In Love with It
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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 Art lovers,

how they chitchat

chins up, clad

with the latest trends.

 

Art buyers,

flies on a spotless wall

only land on pricy marble

pushed forth

within an egocentric frame of reference

 

Adventurously, they pretend

to look for surprises

while being self-centered

allows them little freedom.

 

They never cross the safety line

(insects may get lost).

Rocks and stones

fake smiles and shrubs

are the landmarks on

narrow

(minded)

paths.

 

How amazing

to take a walk

through the maze

traced by art lovers!

 

Cool, soft-spoken,

busy, they buzz…


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 Reviews of "In Love with It"
Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on July 2, 2008
Sure know all about this one... buzz buzz... you have a gift. lindalaw

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
A very visually inspiring poem, thank you for enlightenment today!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Certainly in their own world of making they are too high for us to reach. Been there. Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed by cole joshua (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2008
love creat wisdom...

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on June 26, 2008
~`*awesome imagery`*

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 26, 2008
Your message comes through strongly, Axilea. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ed J.
Reviewed on June 24, 2008
Gosh with the other reviews I don't feel out of place saying I can relate to the atmosphere you discribe. The most I ever paid for a pinting was $1000 and yes I had to sit through the whole blah blah blah abut the artist and trends. All I saw was a beautiful painting, but what do I know. Very well done!



Ed

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
I find myself walking through a hedgerow maze of down-the-nose-gazes--uncomfortable feelings...as if it were me who were the piece of art--an item to be scrutinized and rejected.

You capture great atmosphere in this write. And again, I love the bug analogy--leaf-cutter bees, not honey bees...and wasps in striped yellow jackets--dragon flies with their metalic-coated wings...house flies sporting neon greens and blues...vain creatures (all eyes) and double-jointed limbs, feasting off of another's harvest... good stuff, that... --Charlie

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
I get a charge out of this,,, the games people play huh?? Not too hard to see, as they put themsevles high up on a pedestal. Great Write.
Christine

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
.i think i live this duality everyday. . .. nothing more pretentious than artists and their patrons :}.....
"self.obsessed artists; the center of their universes"-paula cole
i often break the pompousness by pretending to be moreso than they...speaking only in polysyllabic juxtapositions when i walk among them. .. . or using mostly words that start with a certain letter.. .
'a myriad of musical mannerisms in this magnificent maestro.esque work; dont you sense the male.dominated meaning?'
fun stuff.
ness

Reviewed by Selene Skye
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
Intricately woven beauty to astound!!!!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
Love the sarcasm. Bravo. Your style of writing is so connected and at ease with itself. Liz

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
steps_in evolutionary contentment & findings & tweakings non-stop ~ oh my again .-. evol TedSo

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
"Snobbery"...how well you described it!

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 21, 2008
This is a subtle chisel job with just the right amount of bite, and the fly/bee image at the end is perfect.
John

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on June 21, 2008
Self centeredness isn't for me. As we grow older we should be over that stage and sahre with all and lead a better life than being selfish. Not always to be though.

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on June 21, 2008
Axilea - Like the way the poem presents the emptiness of pretention - especially,

Cool, soft-spoken,

busy, they buzz…

Effective ending. - David

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on June 21, 2008
Dear Axilea, what a great subject you brought here. Alas in this world we have all categories of people. I call them simply snobs, who cannot fill their lives with the real and the truth. Life is too short to waste. Love Emile

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 21, 2008
Such truth in this and in all matters of the art snobbery exists, I remember going to Writer's Association wine and cheese parties etc where writers would walk with a vase of flowers balanced on their nose. If you didn't have a string of letters behind your name and a best seller...how could you be a writer.

Fee

Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on June 21, 2008
"In Love with It," but are they really?

I especially like the second verse:
"Aventurously, they pretend
to look for surprises
while being self-centered
allows them little freedom."

I'm thinking perhaps it's more honest to be an artist than it is to be an art lover and/or an art buyer.

I like this, Axilea. It made me think about art appreciation in a whole new way, maybe even less self-centered!

Richard




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