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A Pregnant Promise
by Rebecca S McKeehan → (All Poetry by Rebecca S McKeehan)
Monday, April 11, 2016    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Young love growing up fast.


Sitting on a wooden bench
Outside the entrance
Of a small country clinic,
I soak in the spring sun
As I watch the people
Come and go;
Some are in no hurry to get
Wherever they are going,
While others rush by,
Lost in their own world,
Staring intently at the phone
In their hands,
And blind to everything else.
As it is the lunch hour,
Many are accompanied
By like-dressed companions:
Professionals with professionals,
Old men and old women,
A set of identical twins,
Dressed identically, of course,
And determined to chart
Their own course,
To the harried dismay
Of their stressed out mom;
Yet my eyes are continually drawn
To the young couple
Who pass by
Holding hands.
With their free arms
Around each other's waist,
They are smiling eagerly
And happily chatting
With, perhaps,
The slightest apprehension
In their voices,
For she is obviously expecting,
More than half way there,
I surmise,
By the size of her belly
And the ungainly gait
Of her walk;
But there is a glow,
Seen, yet not seen,
About her,
And I am struck by the vision
Of her as a Madonna,
Gentle and maternal
In nature,
Sweet in spirit,
The perfect foil
For the serious,
Obviously protective,
Young man
At her side.
A mist fills my eyes
As they pause by their car;
Painted in rust
With black primer,
It is way more
Than a mere
Second hand ride,
Maybe it's a third,
Or even fourth,
No doubt held together
By prayers,
Bubble gum,
And baling wire,
Yet he helps her
Into the front seat
As if she were Cinderella
Going to the ball.
I wonder,
As I am sure many do,
Will their love last?
And as I watch him adjust
The seat belt carefully
About her,
She tenderly brushes
The hair from his cheek
And leans forward
To meet his kiss.
Yes, I decide,
As the car soon reverses
And they drive away
In a pale blue veil
Of smoke,
Yes, I think they will. 

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 Reviews of "A Pregnant Promise"
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 14, 2016
I don't know what else to say other than what has already been said, except, young lady, I have to be painfully honest, I do not know who you are & I do remember a Georg, but not your name associated with him...could you update me or remind me as I loved this posting but its hard when I can't recall who wrote it...again, Sorry...-e- (ps thank you for stopping at my site)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 13, 2016
So many relationships start of seemingly well and yet so many fade and eventually die. I love the hopeful ending to your poem, Rebecca. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 12, 2016
Keen observation and even keener writing of the people viewed. Like the tabloid of the documentary. I sense a bit of Edward in the caution about young love and the consequences. I can picture my parents there during the Great Depression with my father only able to get odd jobs so that they could rent a shack for us. If they only knew what my brother and I would accomplish, their lives back then would've been much easier.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on April 12, 2016
Sorry, but if these two lovebirds are . . .

"Holding hands.
With their free arms
Around each other's waist,"

I fail to see how, if they are holding hands, they are able to put their free arms around their waist. I mean, if they were facing each other, yes, but not if they "pass by," which means they were walking. Eh, maybe it is just me . . .

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on April 12, 2016
Can love overcome the bleak economic future they are entering? You care, and so do I. But I know the deck is stacked against them. Still, I like the way you have framed this picture of love.


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