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Goodbye
by Rose Loya → (All Poetry by Rose Loya)
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(not written for anyone in particular, really)

the gift you had to give
me
doesn't give me anymore
what it once did give to me
don't bother with the door

it's creaking and it's slow
the oils don't flow from your bottle
quite the way they used to
it's OK, the weary tool

I have inside my heart, it needs some rest
I'll fall behind
but I'll catch up soon, in my own time
and no, I won't mind

because I think you need someone
else to help oil the door
my heart isn't the one
that you need, no,
not anymore

go find who you'll
remember to
be chivalrous to again

the motivation from that
will help us
to still be friends....



copyright 2007 Rose Loya  

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 Reviews of "Goodbye"
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on April 26, 2007
This poem is bittersweet to me. It is beautiful and wise, the persona having realized something that was is no longer there. Great write!
~Butch

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Saying goodbye is always sad, but it does open that door to a new begining, a new path. Enjoyed.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Nice touch with the Door and oil. You created a beautiful stage with this poem.

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Rose,
Goodbye's are always sad, but sometimes necessary. Excellent poetry!

Many blessings,
~Linda


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