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Had It With The "Poor Me"
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(poor me, poor me, poor me, poor me, poor me, poor me............enough al ___'__ ready
......redundant is redundant is redundant is redundant.......)

Running blue
streams of bandaged
fussing hues,
feels like I'm done
with the tune,
"woe is me, and poo is you"
something new, would you,
you?

Whining depositions
try to cry while feigning
whippings of their
supposed blood drippings,
(really, he's fine, he's just sitting
on a humid pile of him-disease),
still, think it'd be better he,
instead of
looking and pointing
elsewhere,
might be a tad more fruitful towards,
say,
the mirror??

Foolish me, I'd see clearer
doing this too, might would good to
clear the hue
that's gone a foggy, distant blue
instead of that dear sky-clear truth..........

So, I thank you, "Poor Me" you.

Thank you.
In your "bright" knit
blues, you've helped me, so help you too.
Help yourself out of your funk,
that's if you can part with fabric
that's somehow now elastic
enough for your stretched, old intrusions.
You bore me, "Poor Me"
conclusion.......
......................................
.....(yawn)........


Copyright 2007 Rose Loya

               

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 Reviews of "Had It With The "Poor Me""
Reviewed by Fergus Hancock (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
What a challenging string of thoughts, words with jagged edges; a true emotional ride through frustration....

A very real experience, a very true poem.

Fergus

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
this is fantastic, i enjoyed it very much, the style and the wording

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
great word usage and imaging...thanks,

dan


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