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Mine
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(more non-sense....mindless, stream of consiousness rambling..)

Red color,

you bleed

into the lense

of my vision

and sense

making everything

pink, I bet

you do this thing
to many,

it's Ok, I have pennies

to ground into nice bennies

Oh, I'm kidding, still

Love's lending

me her Light

so I'm spinning,

not for long,

feet are big

enough to keep me still

when my wings get thick,

but I won't fly for long

'cause fantasy sticks

to the walls and the ceiling.

Damn, is that me who's reeling

from the pain he is stealing

from my Memory..?

wait, doesn't he have his

OWN - - - - damn memory?



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 Reviews of "Mine"
Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on November 5, 2007
raw emotions not rambled but sewn together to reflect upon life as we all know it. fly with heavy wings and embrace the thoughts that bring you joy.

randy

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
Great build up, enjoyed the climax....

Reviewed on November 4, 2007
This is a beautiful expression,and now that it's out your wings should fly again, and leave the memory behind. Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
creatively assembled flow of consciousness ...

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
Very nice writing sweet lady,stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed on November 4, 2007

Wit-wise outstanding composition... "Mine" sings wonserfully.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


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