yes, indeed a powerful and emotionally stimulating account of a dysfunctional relationship ... your imagery probes, quite effectively, into an unbalanced torment due to a overwhelming sense of insensitivity and apathy ... yet, it seems there is a acceptance or acquiescence to the situation which seems to be typical of emotional abuse ...
"When he robs my cunt like a quick crossover puzzle
He crushes my spine with laughter" ... very interesting imagery ... overall, a very effective poem ...
This is raw, poignant and fascinating. I love the line: "He wants to taste depression in my eyes". That is plain soulfire. If this is autobiographical, that is a sorrow, but you know pain and pathos like only a poet does and you write them like only a lover would....
Powerful dramatic poetry at its best, I think it is time the subject dumped the loser but the writing is fantastic to raise such anger and perhaps pity at this lady who gives do much fro so little in return.
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
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"When he robs my cunt like a quick crossover puzzle
He crushes my spine with laughter" ... very interesting imagery ... overall, a very effective poem ...
This is raw, poignant and fascinating. I love the line: "He wants to taste depression in my eyes". That is plain soulfire. If this is autobiographical, that is a sorrow, but you know pain and pathos like only a poet does and you write them like only a lover would....
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