When the wind moans in the tall pines
and rushes like a lost spirit through hollows
you can hear their voices, the ancient ones
in a language long forgotten, unspoken
good years recorded only in souls and books
the joys of freedom and brotherhood
but unspeakable the sorrows of later years
when the people like cattle were herded
far from valleys of their blue mountains
down a torturous trail of too many tears
Our young ones hungered and gray ones
died along the path, too weary to go on
with trust forsaken, hearts too broken
to force themselves to believe again
in pale ones who broke every promise
betrayed each treaty they had signed
they took away our land, our tongue
our faith, the worship of our god,
our customs, even our children’s names
they thought to make us like them
but always thought us less than them
Savages they called us, ignorant, evil
and yet, who invaded our peaceful place
and how many among them would not fight
for their land, their women and young?
which of them would so peacefully bow
beneath the yoke of injustice and deceit?
along the path where death overtook us
there blooms forevermore a reminder
the Cherokee Rose, sprung from the ground
where bitter tears and scarlet blood
of the suffering red man fell like rain
pure white her blooms and deep her roots
amid wasteland and barren rocks she grows
for what the Great Spirit plants will live on
in wastelands and broken hearts forever
What a great and mighty tribute...It reminds me of my husbands ancestors, the Lakotas, I feel like I've become part of that history, and what an honorable and beautiful one your Cheroke rose is...
both poetry and music grabbed me from the start, this is great.......I love this, pax A
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2008
You certainly know how to make it become real! love holly
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2008
Lovely words-I notice it says May 12 is when you posted the poem-where have you been the last few days? Not to mention no emails for quite a while either but I guess you're busy like all of us
This is so vivid and potent, Belle. I read it as if through flames somehow, speaking a spirit truth and rekindling the history as if it is in the now. The presence and actuality in this piece is rich, the soil of these poetic plains is fertile. The spirit of the Cherokee Rose is enduring and fragrant. You speak here with the full bloom and beauty of your heart and soul. And amazing testament. Bless you, Kate xx
Awesome write. I think I live practically on part of the trail of tears and yes, their voices are on the wind still today. I am at comfort with them as their drums beat while they sit around the fire. Liz
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
Sad, what went on in the early days..
Super write Belle..
x0x0x
It's incredible when we look back and know from diaries how the first pale ones of Jamestown, Virginia, and other places (They would become the New Americans.) were aided and fed by the Native Americans. How little they knew they were cutting their own throats. History can be awfully painful as well as pleasurable. Great music and tribute.
The Native American People summer so much!
Your poem took me through a journey of tears
And emotions!
Brilliant write!
Peace Love and Light...and hugessss..too..Morning Star
The Cherokee Rose talks about her people, one among Hundred Nations, and the scars left on her peaceful tribe by two tongue pale faces.
That rose that sprung from the ground became a very wise squaw.
I know one Cherokee word: Wado. You took us, who know nothing, on the Trail of Tears - you make us see, hear, FEEL - powerfully penned rememberance. Your best -
A great write LaBelle, you make your family proud by keeping them alive and telling how it was. They were very strong people and still are. Thank you for sharing.
America should forever live in shame for your "torturous trail of too many tears." You've done your ancestors proud, La Belle. Thank you for
this. Gene.
So beautifully written, pulls you in on the very first line. And barren rocks she grows only pulls you tighter. Great thoughts, great poem. Love, Bonnie
The drug called "The Shari" has been used for vision quests over many years. But, when all the rivers start drying up, the tribe must send a young hunter named Tomás on a much more important trip through the Amazon.
The drug called "The Shari" has been used for vision quests over many years. But, when all the rivers start drying up, the tribe must send a young hunter named Tomás on a much more important trip through the Amazon.
The drug called "The Shari" has been used for vision quests over many years. But, when all the rivers start drying up, the tribe must send a young hunter named Tomás on a much more important trip through the Amazon.
Super write Belle..
x0x0x
Your poem took me through a journey of tears
And emotions!
Brilliant write!
Peace Love and Light...and hugessss..too..Morning Star
That rose that sprung from the ground became a very wise squaw.
Wahktageli
(in Sioux a "Gallant Warrior")
Fee
Be always safe,
Karen
Tim
I know one Cherokee word: Wado. You took us, who know nothing, on the Trail of Tears - you make us see, hear, FEEL - powerfully penned rememberance. Your best -
*tears*
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <
this. Gene.