Ok there Randall you have heard it from several and now from me WRITE more poems as we have come to enjoy what you offer to us. Great write and thank you for sharing.
Beautiful I wish you would write poetry more often, I love your poems. Now go show your wife this and the boat will set sail. Lovely write, Love, Bonnie
It was interesting how you used the colors to illustrate the words in the reader's mind. This gives one feel to it, and just with the black lettering would give another feel. I think the colors, naturally make it pop, but that black lettering would make it seem more seductive. All that is totally irrelevant, lol, just thinking aloud. REally enjoyed this, as you can tell :)
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Karen
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