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Timing
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A note: My dear friend Larry travels all over the country and this time he has called every day since leaving Portland. When he called this morning, he had startling news, which really happened.dlj

Timing
© 2007
Dan Johnson


Saturday in Portland:
The train left Union Station at 4:50pm,
five minutes late, that’s not bad for Amtrak.
Larry called to say they had crossed the Columbia
River and were under way…
then the cell phone signal went dead.


Sunday, someplace in Eastern Montana:
Larry called to remind me about calling
Darnell and David, which I’d done. Train
Was sitting at a siding somewhere, waiting
For Union Pacific to send a freighter through,
Seems they have the right of way, train is now
one hour late getting to St Paul;
one hour and ten minutes to be precise.


Monday morning, the Wisconsin Dells:
Train is now one hour thirty-three minutes late.
Larry calls to say that they expect to be in Chicago
By 4pm. I recall a restaurant I use to frequent when
I lived near the windy city. Larry says if he
Has the chance, he’ll check it out.
Then in particular order
Larry lists the plus side of taking coach. His
Coach was nearly empty all the way from Portland,
he got to sit by the only electrical outlet in the car, so that he could keep his laptop charged up. The AC worked too well,
and finally, he was close to the john
then he said, in no uncertain terms he was glad
he brought a blanket and pillow; reminding me
that when I go to West Virginia in the fall,
that I do the same; I agree.
Sometimes I think he forgets I’ve traveled our
rail system quite often.


Monday evening, the train is now two hours late:
“We’re just getting into Chicago, don’t have time
to find the restaurant you recommended and it’s no
fun schlepping luggage around an unforgiving city.”
I remind Larry that he’s now an old geezer, like me,
and that he should take it easy.


The call goes out for the eastbound train to load at 9pm CST,
But after boarding, they just sit…and wait.
then at 11pm it rolls out of town.
now the train makes up for lost time
and picks up speed flying across Northern Indiana,
on his way east to Rochester NY.
Train is now one hour twenty-seven minutes late.


Tuesday morning approximately 8:30am PST:
Larry calls to say that the train will be rolling
into Rochester in two minutes. I remind Larry to say hello
to Bill and then the call ends.


Ten minutes later Larry calls, voice shaken:
Larry tells me that just as the train was coming
into the station, someone,
a guy,
can’t tell how old he is,
stepped in front of the still moving train. The train is
now stopped and Larry says that they will not be allowed
to leave for another hour…or so. It seems they
have to investigate, file reports, ask questions, require
drug tests of the crew…and the passengers, who will be nearly three hours late in arriving on time, sadly, sit and wait.


I called Larry back about an hour later, he was fine,
sad, but realistic enough to know that no matter how
tragic the event, that’s life…


Question too difficult to answer:
If the train would have left Portland on time would the stranger have stepped in front of the moving locomotive in Rochester NY?


Dan Johnson
© 2007


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 Reviews of "Timing"
Reviewed on July 23, 2007
It's the not knowing that eats you up!
Some people just give up!
Very sad!
Warm hugs and love, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay POsitive!
STay SAFE!

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on July 20, 2007
That man who stepped in front of that train, if he did it on purpose, knew the timetables well in advance, or was relying on signals of incoming.
It seems to me, that no matter what time the train left, he would've if that was his full intention, done the deed!. It just happened to be that Train.
Maybe the train was late, to give him more time to think it over, to reconsider!!
And maybe he thought about it, and still made the same choice no matter what extra time and grace was alloted.
I get the impression a life line was thrown, but he didn't want it.
Sadly many of us make the same choice!! Choice being the operative word here.
Intriguing though sad!
Ch'erie

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 19, 2007
Outstanding informative piece dan
Enjoyed much
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 19, 2007
Wow..what a horrible to have happened!!

I guess he would done it any way!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Wow Dan some story, and yes if the guy had his mind made up to step in front of the train he would have waited how ever long it would have taken, no one can change that only him and it sounds to me this choice was already made.

Thanks for sharing Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
If the train would have left Portland on time would the stranger have stepped in front of the moving locomotive in Rochester NY?

Much Food for Thought here about all sorts of incidents in life that involve 'timing.' Is it all random, or something much more?

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
i've heard said "everything is in its right time and place"

Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
Wow! This is some story.
Enjoyed reading.

Patti

Reviewed by William Cryer (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
A good one, Dan. It's important to grapple with these issues of life and death, for they are the substance of our poetry.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
This is an enjoyable tale, even the old geezer stepping in front of a slow train from Portland to end a life that was already over. This gives me an alternative; when I get in such bad health that I don't need it anymore. Why not? Frankly, when I make such a decision, I don't think I want to WAIT all that damned time... just to end things in such a messy way. Sorry to ruin the experience.
- Bill

Reviewed by Barbara Mercer
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
Someone has written a business book entitiled "Black Swan" because Black Swans are unpredictable. In the book he tries to explain how expecting the usual is most unlikely. I have not read the book only the critiques but I would say your friend has had a Black Swan experience which can also be be good for some reason I do not understand. It certainly made you creative Dan, waves of love }}}}}}}}} Barbara

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
Man, isn't it true. How did Neil Diamond sing it. "Would'ves and could'ves don't count anymore. What if?

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
The same can be said about "Timing" in the literary world of "What Ifs"...what if The Great Gatsby had never arrived? Sparknotes on The Great Gatsby Chap 2. "The commuter train that runs between West Egg and New York passes through the valley, making several stops along the way. One day, as Nick and Tom are riding the train into the city, Tom forces Nick to follow him out of the train at one of these stops. Tom leads Nick to George Wilson’s garage, which sits on the edge of the valley of ashes."

Unlike the other settings in the book, the valley of ashes is a picture of absolute desolation and poverty. It lacks a glamorous surface and lies fallow and gray halfway between West Egg and New York. The valley of ashes symbolizes the moral decay hidden by the beautiful facades of the Eggs, and suggests that beneath the ornamentation of West Egg and the mannered charm of East Egg lies the same ugliness as in the valley. The valley is created by industrial dumping and is therefore a by-product of capitalism. It is the home to the only poor characters in the novel.

We love you F. Scott Fitzgerald and we're thankful The Great Gatsby arrived...and on time, too, Dan...thanks for this...

Sage

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
Substance for thought, Dan. Fate and all that. Who knows? Thanks for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
Dan it sounds like the finish to a harrowing trip done up movie style! So many troubled trips I hear about traveling lately. methinks the systems are overcrowded, outdated, and overworked. Excellent narrative...Glad friend Larry is okay...

Eileen

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
Those 'what ifs' can drive you crazy, can't they? This is such a tragedy.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
Another note; According to todays' Rochester Democratic-Chronicle, the man who stepped on the tracks died. No name or other information was provided. dlj

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
Very touching, moving piece, Dan. Larry must have been frightened during the entire experience. But, you were there to comfort him and remind him to take it easy as old "geezers" are supposed to do.

George


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