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Can You Stay?
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In my earlier poem posted "Can I Stay?" I felt there needed to be a follow-up, and this is it. The back story to both poems is based on two men falling in love and weighing the price for their love. dlj

Can you stay?
© 2007
Dan Johnson
 
That’s the question! Can you stay?


If you can love me, put no other love above me and promise for all eternity,
That you’ll not let temptation, a pretty face or deceitful dream snare you away from me, you can stay.


But wait, there’s more.


If you can surrender your heart and soul to me, lovingly, courageously, unquestioningly, wholeheartedly and never worry anymore about being footloose and fancy free, then you can stay.


And remember this:


I’ve been hurt and probably hurt someone too, but if you stay always remember, for our kind of love there’s a price to pay. Some will ridicule us because two men in love is unnatural, against scripture and just plain disgusting! Can you take it?


Will your mother and father consider me a certain kind of oddness in the scheme of human madness, expect me to Jesus, confess, or will they receive me in pure and loving tenderness?


For us to succeed this kind of love can’t be faked. Will you love to wake beside me in early morning? I give you fair warning, I love to kiss the stars good night and I love to be held, can you hold me and will you share love and life without fret or care? If so, you can stay.


Go, stay, stay or go, only you can know, but if you stay I will love you with the same love I ask of you. So, can you stay?
Dan Johnson
(c) 2007


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 Reviews of "Can You Stay?"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 24, 2007
An outstanding write Dan
A search for the truth
within a love relationship
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on July 24, 2007
its good to indicate intentions, just remember there are never guarantees in any relationship, , love with abandon of the rules and believe it will be perfect, otherwise we may never try at all

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 24, 2007
A profound offering!!

Good to see the otherside too!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on July 24, 2007
It's good to present both sides of the coin. Not all things are wrapped in gold and probably never will be what we envision they "should" be. Well done, poet!

George

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 24, 2007
Where there is truth there is bound to be trouble, so it's best to face up to it, and you have done it very well here. At least with honesty there is a future, with lies it never lasts. Excellent work Dan!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 24, 2007
Another write from the heart, questions that only a lover can answer.
Thank you for sharing.
Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 24, 2007
A most interesting follow-up, Dan, which proves that many times only the poet really knows the meaning of his/her poem. And this is quite profound.

Reviewed on July 23, 2007
Love your deep heart Dan!
YOu're true to oneself!
Wonderful hard questions to ponder on!
Warm hugs and love, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Namaste!

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
Reviewed on July 23, 2007
questions that anyone would need to ask a lover, no matter what your preference. I can't even pick a favorite line, it was all very touching.

Reviewed on July 23, 2007
Sensitive and filled with many deep and honest questions.


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