Trout- 12 Syllable, 1 line Haiku (poem) by D L Johnson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 8, 2009

I cheer for the trout and wish we'd leave her be... Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on September 10, 2009

There you guys go with the Haiku's when you KNOW I can't write one! loved it!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Hobbs (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

Hi D.L.
Very cute. Enjoyed it. Liz

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

Cleverliy written, Dan! New to me,this one-line Ku. Yes! I DID enjoy...
Blessings - Micke

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

Never heard of this form of haiku, but hell, there seems to be many. I don't improvise with haiku, I like the 5-7-5 sort, but like they say, whatever turns ya on. A moral to this one.

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

Reviewed on August 20, 2009

I've been looking for that trout
If you get wind of where he's hiding let me know :)
Great offering, I enjoyed
The Buzzard

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 19, 2009

... i've not heard of this, Dan... i love these short... VERY short forms! I once had a one-liner published, less than 70 characters all told, including spaces. This little fish certainly knew how to make the most of his many moments by being unmoveable! :)) xx

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 17, 2009

I have enought on my plate trying my luck on Haiku
Thanks for sharing Dan
peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on August 15, 2009

an excellent haiku and excellent advice that we should all heed -- look beyond the beautiful, dangling lure -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on August 14, 2009

lol
good advise for the rest of us too! applause

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 10, 2009

Something new for me to view in this short sentence.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on August 10, 2009

oh yes Dan....reel'er in!!...you have caught this "Trout- 12 Syllable, 1 line Haiku" Hook, Line & Sinker!
Peace, Love & Inspirations'
Vickie

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

Great job... wonderful wisdom.. don't you just love these little gems?

Smiles, SPP

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

Very interesting...It has to be really good to work,and yours is!,,,

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

works quite well ...

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on August 7, 2009

Great advice in an excellent haiku. I like the style too, might have to give it a go. It made me smile because "Captain Van" and I had a discussion about "country squirrels", and their inherent survival IQ. Smart critters, wildlife. Patrick

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on August 7, 2009

We can all take a lesson from this smart trout. Well penned. In admiration, J'nia

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on August 6, 2009

clever piece and trout :)

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 6, 2009

WISE TROUT. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 6, 2009

We could learn much from that small trout.