It Won’t Take Long
© 2008
Dan Johnson
I loved you for an hour,
Then for a day,
The longer we were together,
The more I could feel your love fade away
Like a misty blue,
Like a rambling shoe,
I could feel deep in my heart,
I would see the last of you
The hurt lasted just a little time,
Then a little more,
I started feeling better when I knew for sure
You wouldn’t be walking through that door
Slowly the fade became a blur,
No more lies would you stir,
The one thing I knew for sure was
That you had finally faded away
Like a misty blue,
Like a rambling shoe,
I could feel deep in my heart,
I’ve seen the last of you.
NICE! Short and to the point. Although my experience has been,,, when you're still writing about them, even though you may have seen the last of them, you probably aren't over them.
Good Luck, Dick
these are beautiful & enriching milestones Dan
even though they bare burden to sorrow our heart
Love's Bounty
Vickie
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony
Love,
Eileen
George
Flows real nice
Has that smoking bluesy bar feeling
Ringing through it.
Send it to Norah Jones. I think she would like it too.
Who knows, maybe she could sing it!
Regis
Love,
Sage
Peace,
Dayvid
Nice Writing.