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It Won't Take Long
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Something a little bluesy-dlj

It Won’t Take Long

© 2008

Dan Johnson

 

I loved you for an hour,

Then for a day,

The longer we were together,

The more I could feel your love fade away

Like a misty blue,

Like a rambling shoe,

I could feel deep in my heart,

I would see the last of you

 

The hurt lasted just a little time,

Then a little more,

I started feeling better when I knew for sure

You wouldn’t be walking through that door

Slowly the fade became a blur,

No more lies would you stir,

The one thing I knew for sure was

That you had finally faded away

Like a misty blue,

Like a rambling shoe,

I could feel deep in my heart,

I’ve seen the last of you.   

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "It Won't Take Long"
Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on May 14, 2010
Dan,

NICE! Short and to the point. Although my experience has been,,, when you're still writing about them, even though you may have seen the last of them, you probably aren't over them.

Good Luck, Dick

Reviewed on May 12, 2010
"I started feeling better when I knew for sure"
these are beautiful & enriching milestones Dan
even though they bare burden to sorrow our heart
Love's Bounty
Vickie

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on May 10, 2010
I like the layout and the poem, DL

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
Extremely well crafted. To be honest I think we are better off. It my life women have only brought trouble.


GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 8, 2010
very intriguing love poem, DL! I really liked this it's quite different!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on May 8, 2010
Fading always takes time; the hurt remains. But, we survive to live for that next romance. Really liked this one, Dan.

George

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on May 6, 2010
I like this Dan.
Flows real nice
Has that smoking bluesy bar feeling
Ringing through it.
Send it to Norah Jones. I think she would like it too.
Who knows, maybe she could sing it!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 6, 2010
I live the rambling shoe format here, my friend.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 5, 2010
I can relate, Dan; and I have not found it to be true that "time heals all wounds" when it comes to matters of love "gone awry." Thanks for sharing. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on May 5, 2010
The format looks like the tread print of a shoe that slipped in the mud, Dan...a blues tune the kind written on a cocktail napkin...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on May 5, 2010
Good bluesy piece! Rather slowly sad.

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on May 5, 2010
It takes longer than we'd like. That's both a good and a bad thing. It means you cared. Otherwise what's the point? Patrick

Reviewed by Star Fire (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2010
This is a very sad portrayal of someone hurt, and then rebounds.

Nice Writing.


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