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Because of You
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A brief explanation. I challenged myself to write a poem while listening to a Lucinda Williams albun. This has a bluesy sound, OK, I love the blues, anyway, enjoy-dlj

BECAUSE OF YOU
© 2010
Dan Johnson
Preacher said, then the teacher said, and momma cried, when she said
It was because of you,
And Lucinda Williams
Whispering …
(Oh, I can’t say what you were whispering)
In my ears…
But it was because of you
That I became lonely and Robert Cray blue.
It is hard to follow or even comprehend
How my life could have bent
Like a newly planted willow
Not yet trained to weep
Because of you, I was left
In the pouring rain,
Enduring, endlessly through the pain,
Never breaking, constantly twisting and turning,
Like an uninvited summer wind blowing and burning,
Because of you and Lucinda, and the pain of ungodly sin,
I can still hear Dwaine Eddy slice through a sweet refrain
And
Because of you, I would do it all over, again.
 


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 Reviews of "Because of You"
Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on August 9, 2010
Great job on this bit of blues, Dan!

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on May 18, 2010
Dan - I love the blues, too, and I could hear them in this poem. That last line is the essence of blues.- David

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on May 17, 2010
LUCINDA!!!!!! Damn is she hott! Okay...enough about her...I love the bluesy feel to this. You captured the mood well.

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 16, 2010
methinks this one of your best, DL! I too love the blues,and your poem sure did it justice!

ET

Reviewed by pat medlin
Reviewed on May 16, 2010
love the blues...bluesy soft jazz...'how my life could have bent'...willow not trained to weep... beautifu. mr johnson....left me hmmmm?-ing

Reviewed by Sheri Uy
Reviewed on May 16, 2010
Hi Dan, i haven't heard of Dwaine Eddy but i have a thing with the blues so i have a bit of an idea how good he must be with strings... i like it, perfect rhyme. Peace and love in Christ.

Love,
Sheri

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on May 15, 2010
The blues are my favorite music form. Blue poetry ranks up there too. Good one Dan! Patrick

Reviewed by kg cummings
Reviewed on May 15, 2010
very nice. the blues do reach into the soul and pull emotions that we didn't know existed... wonderful piece. Hugs, kathy

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 15, 2010
I like the blues, and your poem, my friend.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on May 14, 2010
Very nicely written. Dwaaine Eddy ? I have not heard or seen that name in years. Great Guitarist!!!


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on May 14, 2010
Dan, I really like this one. I think it lends its self to several interpretations. (and that's a good thing.) Well done, my man. Dick


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