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Next Time
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Next Time
Dan Johnson
(c) 2010
Next time, so I am warned, could be the last time, on that I am clear….
Next time I tell you that I love you…will you let me have one more next time after that?
Next time I hurt you will you forgive me one more time?
Next time we argue, can we make up like we’ve done before?
Next time the moon shines so bright…will you lay close, beside me, throughout the night?
Next time the sun burst brightly in the sky will you whisper lovely thoughts by and by?
Next time, could be the last, but for me, the most important thing is this time.

 


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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 28, 2010
Certainly substance to reflect upon, Dan. No "next time" would be so final. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed on August 27, 2010
Some never get a next time and your poem gently reminds us to remember it.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 26, 2010
So vitally important is that distinction Dan. For all we have, is now. The yesterdays irretrievably lost in the maze and wash of time and space. Tomorrows, guaranteed to none. Fine writing my friend. An enjoyable read with an important message. Mat love joy and peace be with you this day. Jon Michael

Reviewed by kg cummings
Reviewed on August 20, 2010
LOVE the last line. there is no time like the present. kathy

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on August 19, 2010
My love and I had a little spat
Things are not back to pat
Some "thing" is missing between us
And neither is ready for the next time, thus
We shall work things out
Without a doubt---
So there WILL BE a next time.

Reviewed on August 18, 2010
ROCKIE ...

"A fool and his HONEY are soon parted!"

me n' mine just went bust after 3+ years - oh well - lookin' fer new model now!

tk.


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 18, 2010
Excellent last two lines, my friend.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 17, 2010
NOW is what counts, Dan, and you know it well.

John

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on August 17, 2010
Ah, don't we all want endless forgiveness. Beware the next time. Patrick

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 17, 2010
Aww, how sweet and loving, an expression of a passionate heart...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on August 17, 2010
Living in the future doesn't ever seem to work. But living in the moment...the "right now," is the most beautiful place. Nice one Dan.

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on August 17, 2010
Beautiful romantic poetry of forgiveness.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Duke LaRance
Reviewed on August 17, 2010
I really like this a lot. Every phrase packs quite a punch.

duke larance -- the drugstore cowboy poet







Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on August 17, 2010
Very lovely, I hope your beloved feels the same...treats you will all the respect that you need and deserve. Spats happen in love, especially with brats, we can't always be childless.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on August 17, 2010
Nicely penned, Dan! Love is always full of next times!Forgiving and moving forward.......

Anna


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