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One Night in Clovis
by D L Johnson → (All Poetry by D L Johnson)
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This is not another story about "Brokeback Mountain" Only a reminder that we can find love in the strangest places. dlj

One Night in Clovis
Dan Johnson
© 2010


1.
We met one day…long time ago
In a cantina, near Clovis, New Mexico.
The juke box sadly played
Patsy Cline’s
“I go out walking, after midnight”


2.
You were young and strong,
A cowboy, so you said,
I was on my way to Amarillo,
But ended up in your bed….and there
You wrapped me in your arms,
We loved each other
All…night…long.


3.
When I awoke, you were gone,
The note said mending fences
Sadly though, I could not move on
Hard as I tried,
So…


4.
I walked through raging storms,
No light, except for a thin slice of a lonely moon,

Patsy singing, I go out walking after midnight, playing in my head.

Crossed the rushing creek,
Up snow filled tree clad hills,
Down through the greening meadow,
Over rough and rambling sagebrush,
Scorched by the burning noon day sun.
Ascending high rocks,
Barely holding on,
Pressing on through slamming winds,
Proving only that I am
Driven by the lovely reminder of your sweet and delicious body,
Which is forever etched in the deepest parts of my heart and soul?
And I would do it all again.
Because I’m still waiting, in Clovis, New Mexico.


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 Reviews of "One Night in Clovis"
Reviewed on January 11, 2011
Excellent write Dan. At least you had that one night. That's more than some have. Now "Walking After Midnight" is going to play through my mind all day.

Write on my friend. You have the gift.

Reviewed by Padre Scott West
Reviewed on September 23, 2010
Wow- very powerful to me. Thanks for writing this one to me!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 19, 2010
Poignant, beautiful...reads like the beginning of a novel. So well written.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 7, 2010
WRITTEN WELL. WITH PHRASES, WHICH PRODUCES VIVID IMAGERY...YOU HAVE EXPRESSED WELL WHAT ONE CAN FEEL WHEN 'WHAT WAS' HAS NOT TAKEN A BACK SEAT TO 'WHAT IS'...DECIDEDLY. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2010
Oh my..wonderful writing sweet man..stay safe and well...Hugss

Reviewed on August 28, 2010
I LOVE Patsy!!
Crazy...Crazy for feelin' so lonely...
I love sinning that song!
Thanks for the beautiful poem Dan
and may there be another "One Night in Clovis"

Love & Memories
Vickie

Reviewed on August 27, 2010
So poignant honest and forthright.

Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on August 23, 2010
I hope he cared as much for you and that you find each other again.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 23, 2010
Honest, real, and compelling; thanks for sharing, Dan. Very nicely expressed. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 23, 2010
Dan, a love story from the "Land of Enchantment". The land where the ancient Clovis paleoindians predated us. New Mexico itself is a curious mixture of raw natural beauty, ancient American cultures, art and the romantic wild west. I sense many of those emotions threading their way through this cowboy romance rendering. You have given readers the opportunity to share all of those marvelous elements in this work. May love joy and peace be with you my friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on August 21, 2010
Bluesy, song like, and compelling. Excellent! Patrick

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on August 20, 2010
Nicely done Dan,Loved the last part,you nailed this one....ya got love New Mexico

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 20, 2010
Excellent write Dan
a great write as only you can conjure
for they are your thoughts
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 20, 2010
Some memories will always be etched into the deepest parts of our hearts and souls.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 20, 2010
Such tenderness in the midst of somewhat physically testing conditions where even the fittest and strongest can become weakened by the intense labour and heat. It seems fitting to me that this beautiful contrast exists as both an emotional and sensual counterbalance and don't find the placing of such deep experience and feeling at all strange, Dan. We can bear the scars on our bodies and our minds from the severity of such toil, yet our hearts, the most tender place, can be resiliant always to persevere amidst the harshest, searing drought and on-going labour pains of the search when it has known the depth of being touched by such love. This is beautiful in the recounting - honest, open, vulnerable - and real. May your lives and paths touch again soon. Bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 19, 2010
Beutifully written and very endearing...

Be alway safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 19, 2010
This is fine writing indeed.

John

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on August 19, 2010
Exquisite! How do you come up with such beautiful love stories in such short measure? Excellent imagery and this piece lets the readers' imaginations work.

George

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 19, 2010
This is beautiful Dan and I also loved the movie Brokeback Mountain. I guess love is where you find it. Great write.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on August 19, 2010
I agree with Sage...this would make a great beginning chapter for a very good book. Nicely done,Dan!

Anna

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on August 19, 2010
I hope this is a beginning narrative of a Chapter in a new book One Night in Clovis! It should be, Dan! This is strong material and it has high potential crossover for gay fiction. Get a sexy man/man cowboy cover from Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley designed now for inspiration to complete this gay novel that can and will compete in the LGBT community! Get on it!

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on August 19, 2010
A well crafted piece of writing.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY


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