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Three one line Haiku
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 Three one line Haiku
Dan Johnson
© September, 2010

Sun hides its shining face October rains fall sweetly with grace
 

First the bread followed by peanut butter and strawberry jam, how grand
 

Hands stretched high ask how did God put those clouds in the sky
 


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 Reviews of "Three one line Haiku"
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2011
Oh my ..this is so beautiful sweet Dan...Hugsss how did I miss this one...sighhhh

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 20, 2010
Excellent Dan - your talent shines here.
Light and Wisdom ...
richard

Reviewed on October 19, 2010
I love them Dan
especially number one
I wrote only a couple of these
but never as a one liner
it is awesome to venture off the path
and discovery new things!

Dare To Be Different!
Love's Bounty
Vickie

Reviewed on October 15, 2010
There is a true comfort to the soul in your poem Dan, just lovely and uplifting.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 14, 2010
Excellent pieces all three
well done
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on October 13, 2010
Interesting concept and well executed. Now I gotta go look up to see how they work. Patrick

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on October 11, 2010
Loved them all, Dan! Isn't it grand how you can say so much in so few words! Well done!

Anna

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on October 10, 2010
Dan, the mastery of haiku along with many other literary accomplishments has always eluded me. And then here, you have created a wonderful work my dear friend. I have pondered forever and never will really understand how "God put those clouds in the sky". Evaporation, condensation the law of conservation ultimately fail to truly answer hat question. Thanks for sharing these marvelous haikus with me my dear fried. Love and peace to you. Jon Michael

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 10, 2010
Really enjoyed all three that had much to say with so few words! Superb,DL!

ET

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 10, 2010
Lots of 'meat' in only three lines.

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on October 10, 2010
Beautiful. So much depth packed into those lines.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 10, 2010
War, and beautiful. I have never seen one line Haiku before.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 9, 2010
Warm, comforting rich lines, Dan.
Fine writing.

John

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on October 9, 2010
Beautiful Dan! If clouds block the sun, write about it and it takes the dreariness away. Good stuff!

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 9, 2010
Your words elicit thought and emotion, Dan. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 9, 2010
Thank you for this. I love one line haiku...

a face I haven't seen in years warms the night.

-gene.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on October 9, 2010
All very unique
With one common theme
"God's Majestic Creation."
Enjoyed reading Dan - Thanks for the poems


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