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If I Were God
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Inspired by something Dayvid Graybill wrote.

Micah 6:8 (New International Version)
8 He has showed you, O man, what is good,
and what does the LORD require of you;
to act justly, to love mercy,
and to walk humbly with your God.
 

I was asked to lead a meditation group, and was told I could choose the subject. I chose the theme “If I were God” now for the purist’s reading this essay, I know that I am not, nor ever will be God, but for a few minutes why not find out what I would think, and say, from my heavenly throne.
 

If I were God, these would be my rules; not based on theological ideologies, scriptural interpretation or laws, but based on the fact that it is simply the right thing to do.
 

Rule #1:
*To do justly - To render to everyone their due, superiors, equals, inferiors, to be equal to all, and oppress none, in body, goods or name; in all your dealings with men carry a chancery in your own beasts, and do according to equity.
 

This is easier said than done…how hard is it for us to treat all people equally, especially if they don’t fit out perception of what or who they should be?
 

“Sometimes I sit back on my throne (remember, I am God, and it’s my throne) wondering if all the self-righteous evangelicals and fundamentalists of all religions were off slamming the sinners when this rule was administered. Remember, I am God, I blew the breath of life into you, I also know your heart, and I know when your heart is not acting in a justly manner.”
 

Rule #2:
*To love mercy - To be kind, merciful and compassionate to all, not using severity towards any.
 

“You’re stupid!” “He’s a retard” “She’s caught between elevator floors” We say these things and much more yet think there is nothing wrong with saying them; after all, they’re just words.
 

From my vast domain I would like to hear more “I love you” than “I hate you” is that too much to ask?
 

“Look, I gave you free will, right? Well that does not give you the right to break the will, the spirit, the heart of those who are hurting.”
 

Rule #3:
*Walk humbly with thy God - Keep up a constant fellowship with God, by humble, holy faith.
 

“I, I, I, I” that’s all I ever hear from you! You fool don’t you realize that it is not all about you, we are not waiting with baited breath for what you have to say, or listen to you brag about your latest conquest, because, frankly, dear child, we don’t give a damn!
 

Have you learned nothing, listen child, what I want you to do from now on is check your ego at the door, slow down, take a deep breath, and be still in your walk with me…check out that little sparrow, it doesn’t worry from day to day, why should you?”
 

If I were God, ruling from a heavenly throne…this is all I would ask of you.
*Wesley's Notes 

 


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 Reviews of "If I Were God"
Reviewed by Barbara Henry
Reviewed on January 29, 2011
D L,
This is a view with which God, I believe, is quite pleased.
Thanks for sharing this with us here.
Barbara J.Henry

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 5, 2010
I think if such rules were followed they would soon be realized as a recipe for peace in this chaotic world. Thank you, Dan. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 2, 2010
... think God is just about to give up his chair for you, Dan! He couldn't have said it better Himself. Truth be told, we may try to be or count ourselves "virtuous" in the just and merciful departments... but have you ever tried keeping up with the Big Man himself? That's probably the hardest part... until the "humbly" part teaches us to ride upon his shoulders... Great concept and inspiration here. xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 2, 2010
Well done Dan!!

Powerful offering!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on November 2, 2010
Pretty simple rules. Too bad nobody seems to be able to follow them. Patrick

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on November 1, 2010
Enjoyed every last line of this, Dan!Well done!!

Anna

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on October 31, 2010
Powerful meditation....I am familiar with the passage in Micah; it is one of my favorites

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 31, 2010
Much work went into this, Dan...enjoyed.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on October 30, 2010
Dan, diversity is present to act as challenges that are meant to shape and mold us in His form if we will look, listen, learn and act as He would have us act. Love is the center of God's rein. Oh that it could be so among mankind. A soul searching write and a difficult understanding to attempt to convey to mere mortals filled with all of our frailties and failings. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 30, 2010
Simple, truthful, and much soul searching to offer such wondrous words of spirituality...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on October 30, 2010
Nice Dan...Very nice!...and thanks.

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on October 30, 2010
I liked this poem's subject matter very much. Let me say first the piece was extremely well crafted. Reading it got this old fool thinking. How would I change the world or would I change the world? Sage makes a lot of sense but she is not GOD! Either am I but if I was I certainly would not censor any one. Very interesting piece.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on October 30, 2010
So many good points here, Dan...but I say something about

"“I, I, I, I” that’s all I ever hear from you! You fool don’t you realize that it is not all about you, we are not waiting with baited breath for what you have to say, or listen to you brag about your latest conquest, because, frankly, dear child, we don’t give a damn!"

I, Sage Sweetwater have given over 6,000 quality reviews on Authors Den, some of those reviews to professional authors who have used my reviews for blurbs and CD covers. I have carried many authors here along with me into higher venues of artistic recognition which cannot be achieved within the click circles of AD. I have pretty much worn thin of leaving reviews nowadays on this site. So, If I Were God, I'd tell the evangelicals here to go to hell!

Love,
Sage


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