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Three Layers of Fog-Haiku
by D L Johnson → (All Poetry by D L Johnson)
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Three layers of fog-Haiku
© November, 2010
Dan Johnson

Fog lays low hovers
waits until the right moment
sun sneaks peaks fog gone

Love hovers lingers
waits until the right moment
sparks fly romance high

Fog lifts leaves sweet mist
waits until the right moment
hearts heavenly kissed
 
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 Reviews of "Three Layers of Fog-Haiku"
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Reviewed on November 28, 2010
layers are treasures here
revealed and enjoyed!
Vickie
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on November 15, 2010
I really like the last one! Well done Dan. Patrick
Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on November 8, 2010
Although I struggle to write Haiku, and usually scrap what I've written, I love reading them! Like Christine said, yours go deep!

Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on November 8, 2010
So clever! You have managed to express such depth here!
Best Wishes,
Christine
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on November 7, 2010
clever KU usage...love it when fog lifts
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 7, 2010
The interlinking, Dan, is much more than clever, it's thoroughly satisfying in depth of feeling...
and within the deliberate confines of the form you've managed to convey precisely what you want to.

John
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on November 7, 2010
Yes! It is definitely the last that speaks to me with the most passion Dan. "fog lifts leaves sweet mist, waits until the right moment, hearts heavenly kissed". Three fine works my dear friend. Love and peace to you. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 7, 2010
Coffee lifts the fog from my brain each morning.
Great "Ku" Dan......

~W~
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 7, 2010
Fog can be quite powerful, as are your 'kus.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on November 7, 2010
Beautiful haikus Dan
Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on November 6, 2010
Wonderful use of the form...evocative

Chip Bergeron
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 6, 2010
Nicely done, Dan. Thank you for sharing your creativity. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on November 6, 2010
A very fine haiku.

Namaste
Tony
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