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Ten for 10
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Ten for 10
© 2008
Dan Johnson

10 days ago, you left me.
9 days ago, you returned
8 days ago, you slept with Maurice.
7 days ago, you cried,
6 days ago, you lied.
5 days ago, you were drunk, again.
4 days ago, you were hung over, again.
3 days ago, you were remorseful.
2 days ago, you flirted with Igor.
1 day ago, I left.
 


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 Reviews of "Ten for 10"
Reviewed on September 6, 2011
DAN ... WELL DONE, LAD !

FIND A 'BARREL' ... SHOOT SOME MORE 'FISH' ...

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on September 5, 2011
Hungover remorse is like eating a pound of butter an hour before your cholesterol test. Keep on walkin' Patrick

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on September 5, 2011
the countdown to decision time and standing up for ones principles Dan -- steps to personal freedom self ordained -- I enjoyed this unique and very entertaining work -- I bid you joy and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on September 3, 2011
Wonderfully terse and controlled writing Dan!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on September 3, 2011
Dan - no wasted words. Like how the first line and the last line contrast. Sad and witty at the same time.

Igor? You wouldn't by chance be a Terry Pratchett fan would you? - David

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 3, 2011
We are human and meant to take only so much. Great write dan.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on September 2, 2011
I agree with John totally... but Igor? That alone would frighten me...great job here.. love how you did this!

Moi...
SPP

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on September 2, 2011
Giggle....this is a really kool way to tell a story, Dan! Loved it!

Anna

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 2, 2011
Dan,
i don't know whether to laugh or cry
or just be serious..it's how you deliver it
that hits home - direct, stark, matter of fact
and rather....sad

John

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on September 1, 2011
Ten is his unlucky number.
Peace
Tony

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 1, 2011
Sounds like a normal every day "family" relationship...e

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2011
Hah! Igor, eh? Don't blame you for leaving. Have you noticed that oozing carbuncle in the middle of Igor's forehead.


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